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The Same Deep Water As You
by [livejournal.com profile] solo____ & [livejournal.com profile] jo_lasalle
Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya / Akanishi Jin
Rating: Explicit
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Alternate Universe fiction. None of this is true.
Warnings: If there are any warnings for this story, you will find them here.
Summary: Kame's got his reasons for seeing prostitutes. Jin's got his reasons for being one. Life is pretty screwed up.
Notes: Story notes, acknowledgements and frantically reiterated disclaimers are here.

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"I'm up, dude, and I'm so down with it, I'm all over it, that's what I am, know what I mean?"

 

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Date: 2011-09-22 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natsukashi-yume.livejournal.com
The drugs thing was a nasty shock in an otherwise quiet and almost domestic chapter. It was sweet how they both kept thinking about each other. Neither of them seems deluded by the progress they've made.. neither thinks everything is okay, but they've made so much progress since a few weeks ago and it's nice seeing a Kame who's nervous for more of the right reasons than the wrong reasons. And despite his nervousness, there's this lingering satisfaction and he's clearly able to enjoy things like training and Midori's company where he wasn't able to before. Maybe cock does solve everything.

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Date: 2011-09-22 09:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aya-3003.livejournal.com
It's nice to see them make progress.
Nice in-between chapter. On the one hand I wanna see them together and on the other hand I wanna know what's going on in between.
Finally it's going into the right direction for them.after half of the story is over, long way to go.
Makes me wonder how it will continue, like Jin succeeding to get another job, another Kame breakdown, etc. I cannot imagine that there won't be any future problems with Midori. so far I would guess she found another guy, ends her marriage with Kame and stay friends with him, but who knows.

So far, let's hope that Kame won't hurt himself during his sword lessons.
Furthermore, I hope you two have fun in Japan. Wherever you are there :D

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Date: 2011-09-22 10:15 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ladyc2
Poor Danny. I hope this drugging incident doesn't dent Jin's new self-confidence too much. Feeling safe is a big thing for him. He seemed okay at the club afterwards but the drugging took place outside so he might react more next time he's out for a job (which will probably be Kame). I don't think Jin would suspect Kame of doing that to him but he might unconsciously hesitate over being offered food/drink and with the way Kame's hypersensitive to Jin's reactions lately he'd notice something like that and probably misread the situation and overreact. Well I guess I'll have to wait and see.

Looks like Kame's new samurai movie will be much better than his last movie - although I suppose one day of samurai boot camp is probably too early to judge, but the atmosphere around the whole thing seems much better.

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Date: 2011-09-22 12:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brindhakrishnan.livejournal.com
Ah the drug problems associated with Jin's world is quite disturbing and I hope Jin doesn't have to face that himself...ever! I kind of like this chapter even though there wasn't much akameness...
Our favorite couple do seem to wonder about each other from time to time and its nice to know that. I am still sticking with my previous hypothesis that Kame is going to fall in love with Jin first. And my proof is Kame's daydreaming...lol :P

"But he's got Jin on his mind. Jin's weight on his arm after, almost sleepy. Jin under a sheet, finally relaxed and choosing warm feet over some dutiful exhibition. The next date, and what they'll pick for dinner."

THEY'LL ???? They have now officially become a they in Kame's head?? So Kame is really asking Jin for his thoughts on food selection? so sweet!!!!! And it seems like he's back on track with being himself with Midori.. Ahappy Kame is always loved!! :))

Though Kame's and Jin's relationship is alittle worrisome... If it was an actual relationship I would say its fine..But Kame is paying for a service right? And yet Kame has become this sweet considerate gentleman on Jin. I am glad atleast Jin is aware that theirs isn't quite a normal client-whore relationship. Well from the beginning they didn't have a normal relationship so that could be expected I guess.. And ofcourse I prefer this nicer one they are having at the moment. Its progressing though its not quite headed to a relationship Kame would have with Ueda or Kimura I think.

Well... thanks for sharing this as always. You gals were super early with putting this up this week so am hoping all is well! See you next week!!~~~~ ^^

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Date: 2011-09-22 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agustin1982.livejournal.com
Yayyyyyyyyyyy New Updates!!!!

I want They to be togetherrrrrrrrrrrrr~~~ ♥
I am so glad Kame think about Jin look beautiful XDDD ♥~~~~~
Cant wait for moreeeeee~~~

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Date: 2011-09-22 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akamaru07.livejournal.com
He's thinking of Jin again.

oh kame, you're not alone XD

*sigh* tomorrow night. tomorrow night. longest tomorrow night ever.

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Date: 2011-09-23 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] souleater-angel.livejournal.com
'Client roofied him, is all."

Is all?

"Fuck,"'--No kidding. Seriously. No wonder Jin got worried. Glad the guy got kicked out. Honestly a bit worried as to what might happen at the club in the future.


There were so many excellent lines in this chapter. I really love the writing style that you both use. So many quotes are just so brilliant. Like in this chapter, for instance: ‘Ootomo sent Mikami. Rumour has it the worst of it hit when they were already in the car, and now Mikami is no longer speaking to him."' (LAWL)
This is the kind of guy who looks like mountains will move before he'll be impressed by twentysomething film stars.' (totally made me think of my tae kwon do master instructer)
'Kame obediently raises and lowers the thing a cautious few centimetres; wiggles it around a little. He thinks this is to frighten him. It's kind of working.'-- XDD. I love them all; it perfectly caters to my own sense of humour.

But my hands down favourite line from this chapter: 'Two nights ago at ten, he had to stop in the middle of rinsing his coffee pot and almost called the club to apologize to Jin for that time with the wall and being pleased he made Jin come without caring for yes or no.'
The honest change in Kame is so wonderful. It's honestly much easier (and more pleasant) to picture Kame doing the guilt trip/incredibly sweet thing rather than the dominating/controlling/insane guy thing. I'm so glad Jin has no reason to be frightened by him anymore.

Lovely as always, thanks for this :]

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Date: 2011-09-23 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nitzi.livejournal.com
Sorry for not commenting so long! m(_ _)m
Read the last few chapters all in one go! How Kame changed (and Jin, too)!
That peeing part was really intense (and a bit disgusting for my visual imagination), never thought Jin would volunteer to have that done to him. But I loved the part where Kame drove him home afterwards, it's my favourite part till now, because they both became so harmonic and timid.
So for a while Jin is calling him Kame... :D and obviously falling for him. I really wonder how this all will end, with Kame being married and Jin wanting to go to America!
Thanks for writing this!

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