Fall in Dream
Jan. 1st, 2012 04:00 pmFall In Dream
by
solo____ &
jo_lasalle
Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya / Akanishi Jin
Word count: c. 9,300.
Rating: Teen.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction and we aren't trying to imply that these guys are really doing that.
Warnings: Bad service, dirty trains, pigeons. If there are any other warnings for this story, you will find them here.
Notes: Lulu betaed this for us. Thank you, Lulu, for being so conscientious and enthusiastic, we really appreciate it!
Notes2: Written for JE hols 2011.
Summary: Kame has always wanted to see London.
( Kame is looking around at the pigeons, the people, the pigeons, the fountains, the pigeons, and the guy on top of the tall column with a pigeon on his head, like it's all the greatest thing ever. )
by
Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya / Akanishi Jin
Word count: c. 9,300.
Rating: Teen.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction and we aren't trying to imply that these guys are really doing that.
Warnings: Bad service, dirty trains, pigeons. If there are any other warnings for this story, you will find them here.
Notes: Lulu betaed this for us. Thank you, Lulu, for being so conscientious and enthusiastic, we really appreciate it!
Notes2: Written for JE hols 2011.
Summary: Kame has always wanted to see London.
( Kame is looking around at the pigeons, the people, the pigeons, the fountains, the pigeons, and the guy on top of the tall column with a pigeon on his head, like it's all the greatest thing ever. )
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Date: 2012-01-01 05:04 pm (UTC)You awesome pair!
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Date: 2012-01-04 07:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2012-01-02 05:28 am (UTC)I like the way you addressed how they handle their long-distance relationship too, and Jin's fear they may be drifting apart.
Kame's picture message gave me a smile that has yet to leave my face. Wonderful as always
<3
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Date: 2012-01-04 07:04 pm (UTC)We're glad you liked the long-distance thing and how they handled their issues -- and happy that last bit left such an impression. *g* Thank you so much!
And we're happy you liked the picture message.
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Date: 2012-01-02 06:11 am (UTC)This was very beautiful! :D
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Date: 2012-01-04 07:04 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2012-01-17 10:09 pm (UTC)Anyway, I still have only a fairly minimal idea of who these two are and the history behind them, but for this fic it really doesn't matter. You've made them both so vivid and honest, with the doubts and the delight and the public insecurity, and their cute teasing conversations. It's sweet and fun, and the sad moments creeping in here and there are just lovely. I just love the overall mood of it.
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Date: 2012-01-22 08:38 pm (UTC)We were really pleased by this comment. It's wonderful you got this out of this little story, even when it's not your fandom and you have no reason to care about these two guys. Thank you so much!