Make U Wet
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solo____ & jo_lasalle
Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya/Akanishi Jin.
Word count: 555
Rating: All Audiences
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Warnings: None.
Prompt: "The first time they kiss is in a bathtub full of beer bottles."
Notes: Before![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
je_holiday reveals, we offered ficlets for those who guessed our story correctly. This is for nightinbird, who tracked us down with a chart -- we hope you'll like it! ♥
Make U Wet (Jin turns 18)
by Solo & Jo
"That..." Kame says, staring down into the gently clinking bathtub. "That is... how the hell did you get all that beer?"
Jin rubs the side of his nose and grins like someone who thinks he's being cunning. "We have 550,000 fans, I figured one of them had to be over twenty."
Kame gives him a level look.
"Okay, okay, I asked Nagase-senpai and I had to promise to lock everybody in until they've sobered up again."
It's the usual kind of July and Kame kind of envies the bottles their chilly bath.
"I had to clear them out of the fridge for mom's salads."
The party won't start until nine; Kame just figured he could drop in half a day early to make sure Jin had removed the old pizza boxes and vacuumed up the rice cracker crumbs from two weeks ago. But the living room was impeccable, and so's the bathroom, and Jin's mention of his mom explains why.
"Did she see the beer?"
Jin rolls his eyes. "What do you think?"
"It's irresponsible," is what Kame thinks, even though the bottles are clinking a cheerful, tempting drink me, drink me at him. "You know Yucchi can't hold his drink."
"The toilet's really clean for him to be sick in."
"And Koki gets all maudlin."
"I'll put on some X Japan for him to cry along to."
"Junno will—"
"Don't be such a spoilsport."
"I'm just being the brains of this te—"
Jin's hands are on his shoulders, there's a push, a weird moment when Kame's feet go out under him, his ass gets wet, then more of him, and the bottles welcome him with eager bounces.
"Hey!" He clings to Jin as best he can. No way is he going down by himself. "Hey, that's dangerous!"
But lovely and cold.
Jin's laughing, "I'm the brawn!", not even trying to stay dry, finally letting Kame pull him down, and then he squirms his way properly into the tub and his lips press against Kame's mouth.
Kame freezes, colder than the water, because that was no accident.
Jin pulls back, and he's blushing.
"That..." Kame clears his throat. "That's even more dangerous."
Jin nods. His face is flaming red but he doesn't look away.
Kame stretches up and there's frantic clinking, water and glass moving around him, and he slings an arm around Jin's neck to hold him in tight while he kisses him back, thoroughly, flicking his tongue and almost dying when Jin just... opens up.
The water around them might as well be boiling with how Kame is feeling. Jin's lips are soft and he's sucking on Kame's tongue, just a little, with cute little noises that make something inside Kame curl hot and urgent.
And oh god, he tries to twitch away his hips away from Jin because this is kind of embarrassing, and maybe more than Jin counted on. And right enough, Jin breaks the kiss, and Kame's taking a breath to find some sort of apology, play it down, when Jin gives him a bright smile from swollen lips.
With a clank of bottles he dives down again next to Kame's ear, with a happy floppy weight that makes the bottles clank more and doesn't mind hips at all, and whispers, "Happy Birthday to me."
End
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Tomorrow: Horns for Peri!
by
solo____ & jo_lasalle Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya/Akanishi Jin.
Word count: 555
Rating: All Audiences
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Warnings: None.
Prompt: "The first time they kiss is in a bathtub full of beer bottles."
Notes: Before
je_holiday reveals, we offered ficlets for those who guessed our story correctly. This is for nightinbird, who tracked us down with a chart -- we hope you'll like it! ♥Make U Wet (Jin turns 18)
by Solo & Jo
"That..." Kame says, staring down into the gently clinking bathtub. "That is... how the hell did you get all that beer?"
Jin rubs the side of his nose and grins like someone who thinks he's being cunning. "We have 550,000 fans, I figured one of them had to be over twenty."
Kame gives him a level look.
"Okay, okay, I asked Nagase-senpai and I had to promise to lock everybody in until they've sobered up again."
It's the usual kind of July and Kame kind of envies the bottles their chilly bath.
"I had to clear them out of the fridge for mom's salads."
The party won't start until nine; Kame just figured he could drop in half a day early to make sure Jin had removed the old pizza boxes and vacuumed up the rice cracker crumbs from two weeks ago. But the living room was impeccable, and so's the bathroom, and Jin's mention of his mom explains why.
"Did she see the beer?"
Jin rolls his eyes. "What do you think?"
"It's irresponsible," is what Kame thinks, even though the bottles are clinking a cheerful, tempting drink me, drink me at him. "You know Yucchi can't hold his drink."
"The toilet's really clean for him to be sick in."
"And Koki gets all maudlin."
"I'll put on some X Japan for him to cry along to."
"Junno will—"
"Don't be such a spoilsport."
"I'm just being the brains of this te—"
Jin's hands are on his shoulders, there's a push, a weird moment when Kame's feet go out under him, his ass gets wet, then more of him, and the bottles welcome him with eager bounces.
"Hey!" He clings to Jin as best he can. No way is he going down by himself. "Hey, that's dangerous!"
But lovely and cold.
Jin's laughing, "I'm the brawn!", not even trying to stay dry, finally letting Kame pull him down, and then he squirms his way properly into the tub and his lips press against Kame's mouth.
Kame freezes, colder than the water, because that was no accident.
Jin pulls back, and he's blushing.
"That..." Kame clears his throat. "That's even more dangerous."
Jin nods. His face is flaming red but he doesn't look away.
Kame stretches up and there's frantic clinking, water and glass moving around him, and he slings an arm around Jin's neck to hold him in tight while he kisses him back, thoroughly, flicking his tongue and almost dying when Jin just... opens up.
The water around them might as well be boiling with how Kame is feeling. Jin's lips are soft and he's sucking on Kame's tongue, just a little, with cute little noises that make something inside Kame curl hot and urgent.
And oh god, he tries to twitch away his hips away from Jin because this is kind of embarrassing, and maybe more than Jin counted on. And right enough, Jin breaks the kiss, and Kame's taking a breath to find some sort of apology, play it down, when Jin gives him a bright smile from swollen lips.
With a clank of bottles he dives down again next to Kame's ear, with a happy floppy weight that makes the bottles clank more and doesn't mind hips at all, and whispers, "Happy Birthday to me."
End
*~*~*
Tomorrow: Horns for Peri!
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Date: 2012-02-26 07:49 pm (UTC)This is so adorable.
"I'm the brawn!" Hee! Jin's so cute. And cute akame kissing in a bathtub with beer. XD
(saw the word-count at 555 and had to re-check the username cuz that just couldn't be.... but it was. :D)
Loved this!
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Date: 2012-02-27 12:57 pm (UTC)We are insanely proud of ourselves we managed to write an ACTUAL FICLET. *g* let's not admit that we had a drabble in mind at first...
Thank you for this, we're glad you liked! <3
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Date: 2012-02-26 07:49 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-02-27 12:58 pm (UTC)But thank you. *g*
♥
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Date: 2012-02-26 09:46 pm (UTC)This did tons in proving me that I still become a mushy pile of asfdafdawwwwww over chibi!Akame (apparently my mind learned its lesson in HP fandom very well and now goes blissfully MWM) and anyway, sorry to drop this random bit of angst, because clearly THIS IS SUPER AWESOME either way and I'd love it either way and. teehee. I just realized I copied every other sentence over in my AKAAAMEEEEE enthusiasm, so I had to reduce it a bit or look like a lunatic. Fic(lets) written for me somehow do that to me; I just can stop being excited. xD
I like the summer atmosphere, how they're so young and feel like it, Kame's early cleaning tendencies and Jin being so adorable and... not cunning, and so cool in that dialogue but then so clumsy with the kiss, and I kind of had to giggle when KAME went all cool kissing on Jin, it fits so well. I love the way the two kisses and kame's reaction (and hard-on freak out) are written, because their teenagers and Jin opening his mouth making Kame feel like dying is both awww and asafsafd.
"The toilet's really clean for him to be sick in."
This is so cute.
"I'm the brawn!"
LOL
"That..." Kame clears his throat. "That's even more dangerous."
I love how this is so Kame, like, somewhere between dorky and brilliant and lame.
a happy floppy weight that makes the bottles clank more and doesn't mind hips at all
And this is a great wording of how the hard-on freak out is solved. Happy birthday indeed. ;)
Thank you so much, you two! ♥♥♥
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Date: 2012-02-26 10:05 pm (UTC)Hihi, morbidly imagining Kame's cleanliness freak-out AFTER the hard-on freak out and- [parts cut]
um guys. so i was just hihi-ing over this scenario and before i knew it i'd described an alternate goldfish version and now i kind of... would like to really write in, prose-style - and, would that be alright with you? Because it's your fic and all, and I don't want to try and be better or anything, just. I kind of fell in love with this ficlet and the two the way you made them, and the goldfish seem like a fun fanfic-of-fanfic, or remix now. xD (except jin and kame will probably turn out different than you imagined them but... yeah.) what do you say?
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Date: 2012-02-26 11:19 pm (UTC)so what I'm tryinkg to ask is, may I borrow the goldfish and the bathtub (and an optional kiss) back? Shoot me down if not, I would understand. :)
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Date: 2012-02-27 12:58 pm (UTC)THOSE SLUTTY BABYCRAZY GOLDFISH.
We cheer for them. *g*
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Date: 2012-02-27 06:15 am (UTC)IDK when Solo will get online, hence this being just me, but in case this is still urgent: WRITE AWAY. <3
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Date: 2012-02-27 12:58 pm (UTC)This was an awesome prompt, though, we so approve of how your mind works. *g* And we're glad you found the two of them in character and in-youth.
Few things are grosser than puking in a grotty toilet, so we thought Jin was being imminently sensible! :)
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Date: 2012-02-26 11:23 pm (UTC)hmm, nice. i like it ^^. hot/cold, dry/wet = playtime.. tho' i kinda want to whack jin over the head (nicely) for the last bit. so 'happily floppily' oblivious.. sigh. 'swat makes jin, jin i guess.. thanking you.
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Date: 2012-02-27 12:59 pm (UTC)We're reasonably sure Jin didn't stay oblivious at ALL, no worries. We wouldn't do that to Kame. :p
Thank you for this comment!
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Date: 2012-02-27 12:11 am (UTC)DESPERATELY!!!
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Date: 2012-02-27 12:59 pm (UTC)In a bit! <3
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Date: 2012-02-27 04:12 am (UTC)I really loved it!!!!
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Date: 2012-02-27 05:23 am (UTC)his lips press against Kame's mouth.
Kame freezes, colder than the water, because that was no accident.
So real feeling. *hugs!*
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