9 1/2 Weeks - 09 - (Week 3: Wednesday)

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Week 3: Wednesday

Jin runs his hand over his chin, wondering. He shaved early today, and now it's four, and Kamenashi said 'around five', and... hell, he might as well just give it another quick runaround with the razor, save the time fretting about it stupidly.

It's a warm day and he's got the window as far open as it will go, the curtains drawn. The aircon's too feeble to make any real difference, and Jin knows better than to complain until his rent is bang up to date again. Not that he thinks it'll do much good even then.

At least his room is tidier than it has been in a long time. He imagines there's even less dust dancing about in the sunbeams sneaking past either side of the curtains.

The bathroom has no window but feels even hotter. Stagnant air, musty. He shaves quickly, dabs on the lotion, checks his hair. Needs some attention. But he's got time.

It's been six days. Yesterday was Meisa's last day at the show room and Jin watched the kids, and today he dropped off an application and still had plenty of time to clear away clutter and iron a shirt.

He's humming to himself. Practice, of course. It worked out quite nicely.

He worms out of his t-shirt carefully, no use getting his hair in a mess again, then takes the black shirt from the hanger. Nothing too fancy, not like a suit. Just setting the stage properly for Kamenashi's five minutes, the sing and stare edition. Kamenashi's holding up his end of the deal, and, well.

Jin can only examine himself in pieces in the tiny bathroom mirror, but he thinks that's looking okay.

Closer to five, he shuts the window again. Not performing for the neighborhood here. Then he considers making himself a cup of tea, and laughs when he rejects the idea for fear of messing up his outfit, and then the bell rings.

Jin stands. God he is an idiot. This isn't like the lights coming on across a stadium. He clears his throat and opens the door. "You're on time," he says. He can do approval too.

Kamenashi steps in with all the confidence in the world. His suit is dark grey and his tie has tiny silver turtles on it. Whimsical. "I'm ever so relieved," he says.

"Just don't want you running into the guy who comes for my six o'clock song," Jin says. "He likes to feel special."

Kamenashi gives him a sharp stare, but toes off his second shoe too.

"Whatever," Jin says.

Kamenashi steps in and holds up the plastic bag is carrrying. "Here. It's beer. Try to find room in your overflowing fridge."

Jin takes it. It's heavy. Six bottles, the distinctive Koshihikari summer ale. Kind of a lot for a special slum performance?

"You want one now?" Jin asks belatedly, but Kamenashi shakes his head.

"No. Thank you."

"Nice beer," Jin comments as he straightens from the fridge.

"There was a display, I didn't exactly look around for ages." Kamenashi sounds a little testy. That's right, no comparison shopping for the busy bees.

"Nice tie," Jin nods at him.

Kamenashi's stare goes even testier. "It's a promotion." He looks Jin up and down, too, but says nothing.

Okay, great, Kamenashi's a wanted man. With a turtle tie and a tied tongue.

"Well, I'm glad you could find the time between all your work," Jin says generously.

"Actually I had business in the area again," Kamenashi says. "Though it's always good to see you still have a roof over your head. Your landlord's happier with you now, I take it?"

"Business? Here?"

"A meeting. Not exactly here, but close enough." He leans against the shelf from where he usually listens. Starts listening. Nothing awkward about his stare now, just a flat reminder.

Jin bows his head sarcastically. "My landlord is very pleased, thank you for asking. I'll tell him you asked after his mother and his children, too."

"I bought your last album the other day," Kamenashi says, and actually manages to surprise him. Manages to give Jin that up-down spike of nervousness.

But, hey. There's his answer about whether Kamenashi knows the hot dogs. "Great," Jin says. "Delicious royalties."

"Do you still get any worth mentioning?"

"Well, every once in a while they buy me a Frappucchino." It's true, too. Now and then tiny sums appear in his bank account, and then he can wonder if Eternal got played somewhere. It's usually Eternal. "But I'm sure you know that, seeing as you know everything and everybody."

"You know, it hadn't occurred to me to ask," Kamenashi muses. Right. That's why he turns up out here in the sticks week after week, regular as clockwork, leaving his minions to get themselves in trouble—

"I see the Tegoshi thing blew over," Jin says, and Kamenashi's head comes up at once.

"How would you know that."

"Dude." Jin rolls his eyes. "No screaming headlines?"

"I see," Kamenashi says, sounding very controlled, very measured. And then nothing.

"And?" Jin prompts. "Is that a yes? A no? How many more people did you have to schmooze?"

But Kamenashi's face has shut down.

"What do you care, Akanishi? It was last week, it's not even… hundreds of things have happened since, and what do you care anyway? You're gone."

The answer sticks in Jin's throat, when he's not sure if that was insult or accusation. He's not sure Kamenashi knows either.

"So I'm afraid you'll have to buy the gossip in hardcopy like everyone else," Kamenashi says tensely. "If you can afford it."

For a moment they lock eyes. Then Jin turns.

"Well," he says, and picks up the guitar. "Let me get to work on that then."

He needs a moment, to concentrate. This one needs to be right.

It's two chords, slow ones, before he knows, knows without looking, that Kame got it. Four when he hears Kame exhale, and misses a note. Damn.

"Interesting choice," Kame says into the silence.

Jin shrugs at him. Hardest part was not making it sound like Real Face, the funeral version. But he put in the work, he's ready. "Do you want to talk or should I play?"

"Play," Kame says, and now he's watching Jin's fingers, Jin can feel that look all through the intro lines, and nothing else is moving. Only the rhythm of the first verse breaks the spell – the look stays where it is but Kame doesn't, slow steps all the way until he's in front of Jin. Well, good to have that dealt with. Jin wouldn't want him to miss out.

And there it is, the touch in his hair, a slow glide of strands through fingers. Tidying and rearranging, tucking some wisps behind his ear. If Jin had left it longer Kamenashi could braid it, that would keep him busy.

But maybe he doesn't want to be kept busy with Jin's hair, because those fingers find his face more quickly this time; temples, pausing for his pulse, and cheekbones, and down to his jaw. Makes it hard to sing. Giri giri.

Faint smoke hangs in Kamenashi's clothes. Jin has to concentrate, because this is what he does in Kamenashi's five minutes, sing. Kamenashi strokes the base of his neck and Jin's skin feels thin, and for a moment Kamenashi's fingertips skim just inside Jin's shirt. More, when Jin shifts and the shirt falls that way. Five minutes.

He slows down, he feels it getting tricky. Feels Kamenashi in his space and on his neck, making the most of it. Five minutes. Not done yet. The air between them is hot, and Jin's starting to struggle with the lyrics, he never had a head for lyrics.

Kamenashi touches his chin. Not hard enough to mess up the song, but Jin's voice wavers anyway. He keeps on track though, lets Kamenashi's fingers wander over his cheeks, hits the first bar of the chorus gratefully because it gets easier again, and Kame's fingers touch his lips and Jin's voice dies.

The guitar fades at the end of the line. He can see Kame's turtle tie, sharp silver glitter. The only thing he can feel is that touch on his mouth.

He should be out of that chair, demanding explanations, making a fuss. Five minutes are up, are up plenty.

He shouldn't be sitting here waiting.

Kame's fingers start to move again. They trace the outline of his upper lip and Jin holds himself so still, he almost trembles. It's quiet. He looks up.

Kame doesn't notice, is absorbed in his study of Jin's lips. Jin hasn't felt so much focus in... he doesn't know. A decade. A shiver works itself up his back, despite the heat. Kame's fingers finish a slow circle, and his thumb comes to rest on Jin's bottom lip.

A pause, Kame thinking. A little swipe, pressing down. In.

Jin's not breathing.

And Kame is aroused again, it's blindingly clear. Why wouldn't he be, watching Jin open up for him.

And finally, he meets Jin's eyes.

"That's two weeks," Jin says. He won't be finishing the song with that voice anyway.

Kame thinks it over, his eyes dark and a flush working up his neck. Jin can smell him, familiar Kame under the different cologne, and that he wants Jin. At least there's that.

"Would have been more a few years ago," Kame says. That's no singing voice either. He trails his thumb down Jin's chin, then wipes the spit off. "But good. Two weeks." He's moving slowly, undoing his belt.

There's a weird moment when Jin thinks the film's going to stop or they're going to disappear in a flash of light, but it passes and they're still there. Kame takes his guitar away, and turns back, and god, he's hard. And right there, and Jin doesn't think and doesn't blink and takes him in.

A bit, at least; feels like a lot. The sharp noise Kame gives sounds like it's plenty for now.

He tries again, a little more. Kame holds still. That's good. He doesn't flinch when Kame's hands come down on his shoulders. His lips are dry.

He pulls back and Kame lets him, enough. Spit, he needs more spit. Then he goes again, goes deeper. Sucks; that's what he's doing. It's a strange taste but not bad. Somewhere he is spinning but this is tight focus. Tight.

"You got the idea?" Kame sounds like he's the one with something in his mouth. It should be funny. Jin makes a sound, does it again, the up and down, or back and forth, best answer he's got, and then Kame's hand comes down lightly on his head.

Oh. So that was Kame really holding back. And he's not now.

It's fast it's— how do you even suck when— he's scared that moment, from how much, too much. Until he gets that this is it, it's not worse. Just fast.

He gives up on sucking, just gives up, keeps it tight, holds it there, lets Kame... lets him. Is there.

Kame's hands slip into his hair. Not harsh, they could be harsher. Just hot and he's sweating and the air is never cool enough, and maybe that's why he doesn't think, maybe this fog makes him dizzy and not scared and trapped.

And then the fog goes shaky, Kame's hands jerking against him and it gets faster and bigger and once or twice too deep, he almost gags, and then there's Kame's muffled voice and the taste too strong in his mouth, Jin shivering as he swallows it down.

The heat is still there, Kame all but bent over him. Jin just sits, lets Kame's dick shrink in his mouth, lets it disappear, lets Kame straighten and put it away.

He watches Kame buckle his belt. Wipes his hand over his mouth. His face is burning.

What do you say now? That's unexpected but when he looks back, only if he's a naive idiot. I'm not gay but they both know that and what difference does that make. I've never done this before and why is that even in his head?

"Can I have a beer?" Kame asks, his voice still as useless.

"It's your beer," Jin says. His hands grip the side of the chair, he wants to get up. But Kame is already at the fridge.

He comes back with two bottles. "Here," he says. That's all.

So they drink. It's strong despite the light color, sharp.

"I haven't had Koshihikari in years," Jin says.

"I don't normally drink it either," Kame says, shrugging. "It was there."

Sure. Jin guesses he was there, too.

Kame drinks more; looks at Jin, looks at Jin's mouth. He just came in Jin's mouth. And what does Jin even know about him, when did they last know each other? For a moment Jin stares at a stranger, and his stomach twists and drops.

"I don't like the cover art," Kame says. "On your last album. "

"What?" They both sound like they've been yelling themselves hoarse on a stage.

"It isn't good," Kame says. Kame, who bought his album.

"They didn't want to spend money anymore," Jin shrugs. Just fact.

"Even then I'm sure they could afford something that didn't make you look like the neighborhood creep," Kame says with a hint of sharpness.

"It was urban. Hip-Hop. What do you know about it?"

Kame doesn't lash out. He's thinking, maybe getting his brain back after... "So that was still you. I thought at some point they stopped letting you make decisions."

"I guess it didn't make much of a fucking difference." Kame knows fuck-all about his artistic choices but he does know the important shit. "You know I wasn't getting promotion anymore. The cover was really the least of my problems, but, hey, thanks for your concern. And so timely."

Kame's anger flares cold between them, and then it's hidden just as quickly. "Speaking of tardiness," he says. "I have to leave." He puts his bottle down, the same empty stretch of shelf as last time.

Jin watches him. He moves slowly for a tardy guy. "You haven't even finished that."

"I'm driving, and I have more meetings." He fishes for his wallet, starts to fold bills on top of each other.

Don't think. Don't think now. It'll just show on his stupid flaming face. Whatever he'll end up thinking.

"Same time next week?" he says, and only looks at the money when Kame hands it over. There's a tiny hesitation before Kame lets go.

"Thereabouts," he says. "I'll call ahead."

Jin hides the money in his pocket and nods. "Cool."

Kame bends to put on his shoes, then casts a vague glance at the kitchen. "I'll bring beer. No need to let that go flat."

"Gotcha," Jin says. He stands as Kame lets himself out, cuffs straightened, suit immaculate, not a hair out of place. No sign of sweat, no sign of... anything. As if it hadn't happened. Jin feels sticky everywhere.

Sharp, precise footsteps echoing along the landing, and then they're gone.


 

Comments

[nimlothemeli.livejournal.com]

Well it seems that my brain will have no time to recover from its mushy state *____*

"He should be out of that chair, demanding explanations, making a fuss. Five minutes are up, are up plenty."

Exactly Jin. This get's me wondering if Jin might actually be into this-it-Kame or if there's something in their past that keeps him still. And I wonder what made Kame think of Jin all of a sudden, to make him come for these playdates that are now turning far too kinky to even be called playdates anymore.

And then that awkward chat afterwards where everything is upside down and god... Jin you poor fella' selling your body to the kinky turtle :-< But not sure if he's actually that sad about it... Yet.

Anywho, I loved it <3 (well that should be obvious because Akame shippers usually enjoy a nice sessions and some obligatory Akame-angst/confusion - it's what we live for :P). And as always, fantasticly well-written (I wish I could write even half as good as you guys!) Especially small things as "Okay, great, Kamenashi's a wanted man. With a turtle tie and a tied tongue" makes it a really enjoyable reading experience :D

Good job!

[aya-3003.livejournal.com]

It's so strange to see you first in the comments LOL

[cagnurit.livejournal.com]

What? What just happened? OMG it came too fast, the sex appeared out of no where, I don't know anymore.
I just love it XD

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

What? What just happened?

Kame happened? >_> Glad you loved despite out-of-nowhere, and thank you for commenting! :)

[manuuchin.livejournal.com]

"Sure. Jin guesses he was there, too." OMG THAT CAN NOT BE ONLY WHAT THEY HAVE. PAY ATTENTION JIN! Kame will need you to handle this because he obviously cant.

jeeeeesus this was intense and i was really surprised the way it went down, hah.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Kame will need you to handle this because he obviously cant.

Oooh. :DDD So interesting!

Thank you very much, intense is good, and a bit of surprise is too. >_>

[nightinbird.livejournal.com]

*______*

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feeling incoherent.

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WHOA.

[nightinbird.livejournal.com]

Okay I've read this three times now. I LOVE IT. Like. How Jin gets it, and seriously, that "That's two weeks", I had to stop reading for a second because. Omg. Jin. And then Kame and his jab, and. When he unbuckles his belt? I had to stop reading for a second again, because it gave me the weirdest feeling, and then I read on and Jin is having a weird feeling about it, too. The whole blowjob and how Jin feels through it was all surreal and at the same time so there and real, and it's distinct and fits the story so far one hundred percent. Lol I'm starting to get envious of your blowjob variety writing talent...

It's so fascinating to watch them interact, seriously. it's like you never know what happens next, how the mood will shift. And the suspense over what will happen next time they meet, what Jin will think about this after some room for thought. Man it'll be hard waiting for the next bit. >.>

ANYWAY, SFAFDSAFSDAADSAFDS HAVE SOmE KEYSMASH!!!!!!

[aya-3003.livejournal.com]

This needs a Jin icon. :D

Sarcasm, irony whatever. Kame not getting it. oh wait, that happened last week as well.
I really love(d) that part. *_*

Good choice to leave maths away for a moment. *_____*
I'll have to reread this chapter to get a better opinion out of it (you might get a better comment later~), but I cannot really say that I'm surprised by the developments. LOL Jin had it coming. I'm just glad that it's not another kids chapter. Had enough of them for now. I dread the next one....

[loveyourself6.livejournal.com]

Enough of the kids chapter? Gurl you feelin' okay? I love it when the kids appear! or maybe that's because one of them has my name? Ehe~

[loveyourself6.livejournal.com]

I promise I'll comment on the previous parts too, but I just had to comment here right away.

WHAT IS THIS. WHAT. WHATTTTTTTT. I AM SO TAKEN ABACK. I DID NOT EXPECT THIS TO HAPPEN SO SUDDENLY. I DIDN'T EXPECT THIS TO HAPPEN AT ALL, OR NOT LIKE THIS ANYWAY. THEY ARE FUCKING THINGS UP THIS WAY, EVEN MORE THAN THEY ALREADY HAVE. DAMMIT KAME KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS. but then again Jin why were you offering???

You two CONFUSE me! Dear lawd I won't be able to stop thinking of this. This is so messed up. Dammit you two! Stop writing such good fic! *shakes fist threateningly*

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Sorry if this was rather sudden! The story is called 9 1/2 Weeks, which is a) not arbitrary and b) puts these guys on a bit of a schedule. >_>

But to be serious, we're glad it's intriguing you -- if you can't stop thinking about it, we've done something not entirely wrong! :D

This is so messed up.

We do not deny it. *g* Thank you very much for the comment, it's much appreciated! We hope it'll stay... interesting to you.

[msoddish.livejournal.com]

*Falls off chair*
What the... Just the other day there were cute family moments and innocent IKEA furniture!
My brain can not compute, I need more!
"A pause, Kame thinking. A little swipe, pressing down. In."
I mean this, you should not be allowed to write stuff like this...

Moving on-
I have so fallen in love with this fic!
It's the best Akame I've read in quite awhile and it's much needed. (will probably become my favorite of all times)
It's amazing, it will take me through the forthcoming couple of weeks of brain shredding school work.
Thank you so much for writing this, I'll be sure to stick around!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

What the... Just the other day there were cute family moments and innocent IKEA furniture!

Indeed! Jin leads a complicated life. :-)

My brain can not compute, I need more!

LOL, that is an interesting reaction to 'cannot compute'! *g*

"A pause, Kame thinking. A little swipe, pressing down. In."
I mean this, you should not be allowed to write stuff like this...

This made us bounce! We're really happy that works so well. :) All those harmless little words, right? RIGHT? :DDD

Thank you for this lovely, encouraging comment! We're happy to help with school work distraction, and yay for sticking around!

[akiracheng.livejournal.com]

...wait, whaaaa.......

I started off thinking Jin's like a girl preparing for a date - how fitting! Then it kind of went south because snappy, tense Kame did not bode well for a romantic date (although he did bring a thoughtful gift using information gathered on a previous date!).

Then Jin started singing and why does Kame even bother starting on the other side of the room? He should save time and start closer, then he wouldn't be left wishing the song was longer at the end of ther performance!

Then Jin said, "That's 2 weeks" and I completely missed the point until Kame starts unbuckling his pants. Then I went back and re-read and thought, "they're so in-synch with each other Kame doesn't bat an eye when Jin offers a blowjob that bluntly!" I really wonder what was going through Jin's head though before he made the offer...singing for the money is one thing but I can't see Jin doing that for money, so why???

And I liked how they start the conversation abt Jin's last album before the performance, have the performance and the extra and then go back to discussing Jin's last work like what happened in between wasn't of astronomical impact. Still, more conversation means we'll eventually get the whole backstory out of them! Looking forward to the next one!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Then it kind of went south...

LOL, no pun intended, huh? :)

(although he did bring a thoughtful gift using information gathered on a previous date!).

Indeed. Always well organised, our boss!turtle.

Then Jin said, "That's 2 weeks" and I completely missed the point until Kame starts unbuckling his pants. Then I went back and re-read and thought, "they're so in-synch with each other Kame doesn't bat an eye when Jin offers a blowjob that bluntly!"

This is awesome. We're really pleased you read it that way. :) Yeah, they're definitely on the same wavelength here. ♥

As for why... Jin probably doesn't know that either. It was just a snap decision. Seemed like the thing to do at the time?

And I liked how they start the conversation abt Jin's last album before the performance, have the performance and the extra and then go back to discussing Jin's last work like what happened in between wasn't of astronomical impact.

♥♥♥♥♥♥

Thank you for this wonderful comment!

[lieben-kame.livejournal.com]

HOW DO I ORGANIZE MY FEELS AKSDJKLAHD I FEEL AS CONFUSED AS JIN RN BUT I'M SO HAPPY



OKAY OKAY first, Jin being kinda nervous and continuously checking himself to make sure he looks nice and being pretty cheery and saying funny things, even though Kame wasn't reacting at all because he was too busy being a pillar of ice, was soooo adorable and a bit unexpected, I would say. :D But he seemed generally happy to have Kame there for once and awwww.



But seriously, Kame's douche level was like on max level, what the fuck.

"So I'm afraid you'll have to buy the gossip in hardcopy like everyone else," Kamenashi says tensely. "If you can afford it."

Was that really necessary, I mean, at the beginning I understand because they were both being dicks to each other, but Jin was actually being nice this time. Calm your shit, Kame. >.>;;



ANYWAYZ, the mouth touching was lovely and I was all like "HEEHEEHEE" when Jin stopped singing because he couldn't deal but then when it advanced to mouth fucking (there is no nicer term for it is there? XD) CHRIST I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING (no pun intended) SINCE KAME WAS IN SUCH A BAD MOOD AND I'M SITTING HERE LIKE









I must admit Kame like this is reminding me of SDWPsycho!Kame a bit, because he was always in a sour mood too, sort of, before he did things to Jin. Except this time, it's consensual and he left Jin just feeling really embarrassed and flustered and not humilated so it's all good. :D POOR JIN THO HE'S SO CUTE

What do you say now? That's unexpected but when he looks back, only if he's a naive idiot. I'm not gay but they both know that and what difference does that make. I've never done this beforeand why is that even in his head?

IT'S OKAY BB YOU DID GOOD, YOU DID GOOD. *PATS* And how on earth they were able to talk normally, even though hoarsely, afterward like it never happened is beyond me but hey kudos to them. And even though I'm still like "What the FUCK Kame, seriously, are you okay, well you should be okay now because you just came in Jin's mouth, but really, did you just wake up this morning like "Yeah, I totally feel like putting my dick in someone's mouth today OH RIGHT I'M SEEING JIN THAT'LL WORK. 8D" He's confusing me more and more each chappie but it makes him fascinating. :D Oh dear, I wonder what'll happen the next time he comes over now.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

HOW DO I ORGANIZE MY FEELS

Well, first you need a box. Then you need a second box. Then you get a felt tip pen and some duct tape...

But he seemed generally happy to have Kame there for once and awwww.

Heeeee, ya think? :DDDDD We think too. Not very exciting where he lives. :p

(That Jin gif is just *_______* and makes us feel guilty. Is there an emoticon for guilt? Cuz we'd be using it all over the place. T___T)

Calm your shit, Kame.

YOU TELL HIM, LEXY. (Can we hide behind the tree first?)

LOL your gifs. *g* Sorry for unexpected; clearly this was even more unexpected than we'd expected. (NO PUN INTENDED!) We, like Jin afterwards, felt like this was signalled a while ago... #dirtymindedauthors

IT'S OKAY BB YOU DID GOOD, YOU DID GOOD. *PATS*

You caught that, didn't you? :D A boy likes being reassured sometimes.

Yeah, I totally feel like putting my dick in someone's mouth today

Does it take a special day to think that? *g* But no, it's probably not a spoiler to say that Kame didn't entirely expect his day to go like that, either.

Oh dear, I wonder what'll happen the next time he comes over now.

Stay tuuuuuuuned! THANK YOU FOR AWESOME COMMENT WHICH IS AWESOME! And sorry for all the winding up, we can't help it ORZ

[starg8fan-liz.livejournal.com]

*_* can't wait to see what happens next time LOL XDD Awesome part >__< looking forward to the next part!! ^_^♥♥♥♥♥♥

[miyajima-juri.livejournal.com]

this is giving me the creeps.... just what the fuck happened again? my mind can't seem to grasp the whole thing... i mean, i was just there, reading, then reading then all of a sudden, someone came on someone's mouth... i mean, dude, really?!
my mind isn't working properly i guess... may be i should go through it all again? *off to reading it all again*
okay. here's the deal. my head can't still grasp the whole thing.... i'm kinda like a kid that saw porn for the first time....
this is good... really.... actually, i didn't saw that one coming on the first read.... i was expecting something like a boring one again... i mean, kame touching him here and there as if he has woken up to the idea of "hey i'm going to meet jin today which means today is jin-touching day" kind of thought.
but then yeah. that happened.
and then here's the still kind jin. i was expecting some bad words from him after the shock. i mean, we all know he's not gay (or as the story says)
thank you so much for then he blew him up. i mean, what am i suppose to think now, akanishi?
thanks so much for this... looking forward to next (whatever that defines) time, yes? thank you. :)

[abyssinian13.livejournal.com]

well, we requested for more interaction between them, didn't we?
i'm still reeling on that..kame, you're making me dizzy with all the mood swings you go thru when you're with jin..
its been building up for the both of them these past weeks, especially for kame with all those touching..
is jin some kind of a stress reliever for kame or what?

i really like it that jin doesn't just bow down to kame when they're talking..he makes concessions(shaving, tidying up his place, etc) but he gives back as good as he gets when kame's being all mighty kame on him..

i really, really like to know what goes on kame's head with all these things with jin..

thank you for REAL FACE..though jin didn't get to finish it, getting distracted with all those lonely hands..
and thank you for turtle tie-wearing kame..

thanks for the update..will be anticipating for week 4!!!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

well, we requested for more interaction between them, didn't we?

Yes, it's totally NOT OUR FAULT. *g*

its been building up for the both of them these past weeks, especially for kame with all those touching..

Yay! We think so too, and Jin agreed at the end. Just didn't notice, the poor guy.

is jin some kind of a stress reliever for kame or what?

You're on to something there. :-) This is a very observant comment, and we totally squeaked on Jin giving as good as he gets. That's really important to us, as is when he bows down and when he doesn't.

Thank you so much for this feedback! *____*

[sablenoir4.livejournal.com]

can i just say [leiben_kame] that last gif *______*

right. i guess this is all or nothing..

k-san – what a bitch. and bitter with it. meisa's life is her own. she doesn't need your judgment. don't care if you are her mom. just deal with your issues..

but tbh, with what follows, this first part feels to me a bit like a misplaced aperitif - too close to the meat course/action to feel healthy. child protection radar in my brain.. really jin? selling sex for kiddie time? as i said, i have child protection issues.. don't get me wrong. it happens. all the time. just not actable on, unless kiddies are with while mom/pop working. which also happens..

moving on..was back at airport this week, meditating on excess baggage. strange how fic mirrors reality..

more specifically, as the dialogue kicked in, the thot: 'if these two had knives, they'd stick them in deep and true..' the relentless stick and stab, on and on. just give it up already, please.. and this pops in my head they stab it with their steely knives, but they just can't kill the beast [eagles, hotel california]. there. that one.

so, could it get any worse? stupid question. and when it does, am asking: 'can i cry for these two here? can i?' and 'do i sob or, do i smash something?'

then Jin. "Cool!" cool? really? ftw jin? really?

forgive me if my SDW image of benevolent fairies stirring their soup just got pasted over with macbeth's witches and their cauldron.. Fillet of a fenny snake, In the caldron boil and bake; Eye of newt, and toe of frog, Wool of bat, and tongue of dog, Adder's fork, and blind-worm's sting, Lizard's leg, and owlet's wing,— For a charm of powerful trouble, Like a hell-broth boil and bubble. and that's just the warm-up..

tell me i am right to trust you to lead us through murk and murkier to somewhere that'll make sense? and ease the ache?

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Kuroki-san... yeah, she is bitter. She had much higher hopes for the happiness of her child. We don't like the woman but we'd find it hard to blame her, too.

Misplaced aperitifs... well. The sad fact is that the only things Jin has going on in his life right now are kids and Kame, so unless we write very long chapters of him hanging around doing nothing, those bits will always be pretty close together. We'd get very bored writing long chapters of him hanging around doing nothing. >_>

We do think that a character can be A Dad and still be the protagonist in a story called 9 1/2 Weeks (*cough*) - but we can also understand that that's not everybody's cup of fairysoup. :) Please don't feel you have to continue reading if this thing makes you too uncomfortable.

(Btw wtf, benevolent fairies in SDW? SDW Kame is much worse to Jin than this Kame here is! *boggles*)

We hope that all this will make sense in the end, yes. :) And it certainly eased our aches, but we're kind of cold pricklies, so who knows.

Thank you for commenting! ♥

[krystal-32206.livejournal.com]

...Eh?!?...............wtf just happened?!? My brain just shut down for a moment. But, oh god! What the hell just happened!!!

What do you say now? That's unexpected but when he looks back, only if he's a naive idiot. I'm not gay but they both know that and what difference does that make. I've never done this before and why is that even in his head?

Jin, I feel you. Whatever's possessing Kame, only Kame knows. So just keep on playing Kame's twisted game. Do it for the kids. Think happy thoughts and just let Kame fuck your mouth. LOL! I'm so sorry my dear authors but this chapter just took me back to SDW land and my brain kind of malfunctioned. Thanks for the update though. ^_^)v

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Apologies to your brain. ;-) We hope it can be recovered, or if not at least recycled. >_>

Jin, I feel you.

Heeee! Good, that pleases us.

Though this Kame is still SO MUCH NICER than SDW!Kame...

Thank you very much for the feedback! ♥

[dungbrains.livejournal.com]

you keep making kame obsessed with jin's lips (when it's actually you who are, aren't you so is kame though, undoubtedly) i knew this would happen i just didn't expect it so soon and i swear my brain has frozen oh god

why isn't jin reacting?! ... is he that desperate for money?! or has something happened between them in the past?

kame's obviously holding a lot against him but he can't fight his desire (who could >.>). He's handling this so badly, I kind of hope Jin is gonna take (kame again) advantage of it.

i don't know how you do it but after five years of reading A LOT of fanfictions never have i come across such creative smutt writers. you're brilliant.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

It had to happen, didn't it... >_>

Jin's motivations are not entirely clear to himself. But money is always good to have. :)

Yes, Kame is very annoyed with Jin. But why fight the desire? It's working, right? :)

#blushing Thank you for this awesome compliment. Creative smut 4ever! :)

[laksmianindita.livejournal.com]

i wonder what will happen next...
really... can't wait for your next update :)

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Well may you wonder... Care to speculate? :)

Thank you for commenting, we hope you continue to find it interesting!

[rydion9.livejournal.com]

when i was reading i was like
eeh- what- CHOTTOOO- WHAAAAAAATTT
XDDDDD
i have to read it a couple of time till i can register it to my brain LOL
haha great!

anyway, my favorite part is always, when jin sings and kame teases him, it's *__________*
especially this chap when kame's playing w/ jin's lips uuuuuuuuugghhh~~~ my kokoro!!1!! ♥

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Your poor brain. We hope it has recovered. >_>

Yeah, Kame likes Jin's lips. So full and soft... *___* (Um.)

Thank you for commenting! ♥

[brindhakrishnan.livejournal.com]

hahaha Only you girls can deliver stories that make the expected be unexpected. For the past two days, we've been pitying Jin and watching his interaction with his family, cursing and swearing at people who turned Jin down expecting an akame scene to come soon but it was not appearing... And then BAM! this happens!! lol :P

And from the ending, Kame will definitely come see Jin next week right, he's promised more beer?! He's not going to hide from embarrassment.

Oh oh!! Kame told Jin he bought his CD!!! Wasn't Jin wondering if Kame listened to his songs? Even though Kame used that info as a very awkward filler at the end.

Thank you for the update!!~ Till next time...

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Only you girls can deliver stories that make the expected be unexpected.

Blushing! Thank you, that's a great compliment. We were worried about being too predictable. >_>

BAM, yes. :D

Yeah, Jin was wondering, so now he knows. (And gets to buy himself another frappuccino with the royalties.)

Thank you for this lovely comment! :)

[candle-lies.livejournal.com]

I swear there's something wrong with the both of them. Completely did not expect that blowjob thing to happen. And Jin actually offering?? And kame gg along with it? And all the normal talking like as if it didn't happen afterwards? Like wait what was that? I'm lost. Haha :D

I think I'm even more confused than Jin but you've got me intrigued enough to keep wanting to know what's gonna happen next :D (gotta say i like the akame interaction days best, as crazy as they may be :P ) next update come quick! Thanks for the shares!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Jin actually offering?? And kame gg along with it? And all the normal talking like as if it didn't happen afterwards? Like wait what was that?

That was them being practical. :p

No, okay, that was... ha ha, we aren't telling and they don't know. HAHA.

Glad we got you intrigued and that you like it despite the crazy! Hope to see you again! <3

[bellemelody.livejournal.com]

Canon characterization for me: Jin doesn't make any sense.

Because Jin doesn't make sense, usually and almost all the time. This time Jin doesn't make any sense for me at all. I don't get what just happened. For a moment I thought they had some past, like some UST or maybe some making out during there concert tours once a lot of years ago, but you wrote here that this is Jin's first time and he is not even a gay.

Why Jin is not screaming? He can bite Kame, I think >_>

The descriptions are amazing and crazily hot, CRAZILY.

I was reading this part trying to understand, when I spent hours trying to understand and still I don't get it.

WHY JIN IS OK? KAME IS CRAZY AND STILL WHY KAMEIS DOING IT? WHY KAME IS DOING IT AND WHY JIN IS OK?
WHY KAME IS DOING IT SO SURE THAT JIN WON'T BITE HIM? WHY JIN IS NO REACTING THE WAY I THINK HE WILL?

Are they both crazy? They are both so messed up in all possible ways. They are destined to be together, so crazy and horny and illogical they both are. <_< It makes me think about previous parts, when Jin saw what effect his singing has on Kame he was ok with it. I find it strange, but he was ok knowing it and looking and now he is ok with doing it. Jin is making sense after all. CAN YOU POST ALL THE FIC already ;______________; !!! I'M SOOOO CURIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!! adfhjkjhgfsxrtftufyujtuuiferguifreguifgreuifgeruifgeeuifgewuifgeuwiuiwfguiefwgiu Thank you for this bomb, it hits me hard, it still is ringing in my head. <3

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Canon characterization for me: Jin doesn't make any sense.

Did you insult Jin there? You insulted Jin there. WE SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE!!! #growl

Why Jin is not screaming? He can bite Kame, I think >_>

That made us ROFL so hard! We wish we'd put this thought into Jin's head... not that he would have done it, but it would have been funny. Excellent! You are an excellent unicorn!

The descriptions are amazing and crazily hot, CRAZILY.

*___* Thank you. That makes us really, really happy. *___*

WHY KAME IS DOING IT SO SURE THAT JIN WON'T BITE HIM?

Because it was Jin's idea!!

They are destined to be together, so crazy and horny and illogical they both are.

And that is the explanation for everything! They are doing it because they can't help it, because it is DESTINED. The authors can't help it either. DESTINY RULES!

Not posting all the fic, ha ha. This is way too much fun. #do-S

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Hey! Glad you found us! Well may you wonder wonder wonder... #song We're not telling. But we're very happy to see you again! Thank you for commenting! ♥

[lady-aenea.livejournal.com]

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as usual, i read this at the office. And now i have to run to the bathroom and lock myself to scream.

And it's real face this time and it hurts in a PERFECT way.

And Kame.... OMG Kame.... Poor little darling kame (hi i am a biased fangirl)... I just can't help but imagine what is happening in that pretty control freak mind of you, but honey, you're being such a jerk :'D. And i wouldn't want it any other way.

Sorry for the incoherent comment, i'm kind of ultra hypped right now!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Oh, your bathroom! All these old friends we are encountering. *g* Say hi from us next time! (But be careful, you know how bathrooms echo... >_> )

Poor little darling Kame... YOUR PRIORITIES!!! though actually we think we kinda agree. except for the jerk part

Thank you so much for the comment! HEARTS Glad you liked Real Face, we thought that might be appropriate. >_> Also, fearless!Jin. :)

[circuside.livejournal.com]

I LOVE IT HOW HIS NAME SWITCHED FROM KAMENASHI TO KAME. ♥♥♥ My heart jumped XDD

and his tie has tiny silver turtles on it

That's cute ;www; ...even if it was for promotion...

"Just don't want you running into the guy who comes for my six o'clock song," Jin says. "He likes to feel special."

TELL HIM, JIN. ilu XDD ♥

Sure. Jin guesses he was there, too.

Ouch >___>

This fic keeps stabbing me in the heart. And my M-heart likes it. ♥

You know, when Kame touched Jin's lips I was thinking "so they'll go further and further everytime and soon they are fucking" and then... A BLOWJOB. ALREADY?! OKAY. I'M NOT COMPLAINING.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

We liked the thought of Kameties too, promotion or no!

Oh, you noticed the name? We figure Jin didn't. *g* Happy that had an effect!

Your M heart and this story should get on fine. YAY! :D

You know, when Kame touched Jin's lips I was thinking "so they'll go further and further everytime and soon they are fucking"

HA! We like your brain. *g* Thank you so much for the feedback!

[(Anonymous)]

Sadly work keeps me busy so no time right now for ap roper full comment...Cause its 4:20 am... :S But I promise to come back on the weekend an comment properly...But fr now just wanted to say one thing - it's chapters like these in your fics that I start making a list in my head of all the things I'd be willing to do or sell just to get a 'Kame POV' here... O_o

THANK YOU! *bows*

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Hello!!! Are you one of our nonnies from SDW? If so, welcome back. :)

We're very sorry that there isn't a Kame POV (MWAAAHAHA). We thought it'll be more interesting without one. :p

Looking forward to your weekend thoughts! ♥

[leen1707.livejournal.com]

I won't promise I will like faithfully comment under each and every chapter, though I have been wanting to express just how glad I am that you, guys, are posting a new story again. And it sort of gathered by now, even if I still might not write anything more but a few disjointed impressions...

But I keep getting this feeling that for Jin "real life" are all those other chapters - the visits with children, paying out his landlord, applying for jobs (however unsuccessfully), helping a foreigner - while these meetings with Kame are sort of a "twilight zone", where everything is just a bit unreal, and so everything is possible and everything is sort of alright, because... well, it isn't quite real anyway (does it even make sense?). Or maybe Jin was like - totally existing within this "twilight zone" before the first Kame's visit, and it's now that this zone is sort of shrinking and simultaneously intensifying to the duration of Kame!meetings.

Makes one wonder just how does the reality distribute for Kame, and what is, or more importantly - what feels more real for him, these meetings or whatever high and mighty life he's leading outside of them. And what generally goes on inside his head. Which, considering that it is Jin POV, we may only know if he speaks about it - and it can happen like never...

May I also comment on how I adore the way you write Jin so outwardly weak and Kame so outwardly strong - the difference of their positions and dispositions blatantly stressed (well, within Jin's POV that is), and yet one can't help feeling that however low and despairing Jin by rights should be, he's sort of climbing up from out of it little by little, and it is Kame, who is, yeah, on top of this world, yet crumbling. It sort of was the same way in SDW, but it somehow stings more here, this being so much less AU fic and all (I sure hope it remains AU, so I do, but still it is not a clear AU that SDW was, but a spin-off of current reality, and the kind of "future them" you write in this spin-off - hurts so sweetly badly).

Oh, and lol - it's the end of the third week, and I already despair that 9 1/2 is so little - for a fic from you.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Hi! So good to hear from you again, we love your insightful comments. What do you mean, 'disjointed impressions'? We feel a bit like you went and looked in our brains. >_> Really, it's hard to reply to this comment in detail because we feel we'll be giving too much away. Let's just say you pick up our hidden little cues scarily well. We're loving it! :)

he's sort of climbing up from out of it little by little, and it is Kame, who is, yeah, on top of this world, yet crumbling. It sort of was the same way in SDW, but it somehow stings more here, this being so much less AU fic

Yes... we feel a bit bad about that and we hope that it'll really be AU. Jin, where are you??? The suspension should be over soon, wasn't it in February that it happened?

Thank you for this amazing comment! ♥♥♥

[ttalktomesoftly.livejournal.com]

Wtf did I just read?

Okay, that sounds wrong, but I have to say I'm pleasantly surprised. I mean, I thought the sex wouldn't come but until later. I just, akdboaubdoasd. My brain has been fucked. REAL FACE, REAL FUCKING FACE. You know what that means? That I fucking screamed, like, irl.

Anyway, I have a few quotations to make so please bear with me a little longer :P

"I'm not a lady, I'm just a girl, dad," Sara complains. "You make me sound like I'm a yakuza."

She's so freaking huggable.


"You're on time," he says. He can do approval too.

No words, just, this made me grin :P


If Jin had left it longer Kamenashi could braid it, that would keep him busy.

I seriously cracked up at this. My dad asked me what was wrong with me because I couldn't stop laughing. I mean, the mental picture of Kame braiding Jin's hair and then Jin having two braids Dorothy Style was just too much for my brain xD

Anyway, I really enjoyed this part. Even if I just quoted three parts there were a lot of moments when I grinned or wanted to kill Meisa's mom and then remembered Jin's failure at life so I forgave her. And then Kame, oh Kame. What I'd do to see what he feels and thinks.
Well, that's all, I think. I'll just wait here not so patiently for your next update :D

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Ha ha, we made you scream! :D #pleasedauthors

We just have 9 1/2 weeks, we needed to get going with the sex. #pragmatic Well, and also, Kame is a little bit desperate. :p

Yay, you like Sara. :))


Yes, Jin with two Dorothy braids and then a blow job... excuse us while we go wash out our brains. :p

Thank you for this fun comment. :))))