9 1/2 Weeks - 15 - (Week 4 1/2: Sunday)

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Week 4 1/2: Sunday

He sleeps when he gets off shift, because six a.m. is no time for phone calls, to anybody. He's also a little delirious and maybe hallucinating orange feathers. Pushing forty and still a baby about sleeping, he thinks, and then five hours are black and gone, just like that.

It's the first thought in his head when he wakes up again, bleary-eyed but reasonably awake. Awake enough for coffee, and staring at his hands around a mug for ten minutes while he drinks it and thinks. Then he picks up the phone.

Kame answers on the third ring. "Hello?" he says, cautiously. So he checked his screen before picking up. And answered anyway.

"Hi, hope I'm not interrupting a Sunday morning full of work," Jin says.

"It's noon," Kame points out. "I'm just taking a break."

"Great, perfect timing then!"

There's a pause.

"What do you want?"

That doesn't sound patient. Jin comes to the point.

"I was wondering if you have time to come by. I've got a new song."

"Today?"

"Yeah," Jin says, no sweat. "Sunday special, for loyal customers. Treat yourself to something nice."

The pause this time is longer, feels heavy.

"Why?" Kame says at last.

"I need some extra cash," Jin says. Why beat around the bush. "And you like my… songs." He's pretty sure. He never actually stopped to wonder how lame he'd feel if Kame turned him down.

He's getting a lot of time to wonder now. Let's keep this all, before the fall in his head, irony he does not appreciate.

"Two forty-five or thereabouts," Kame says at last. "I have one more thing to take care of."

Jin's heart gives an inappropriate thump. Not exactly dropping everything but not a hard sell, either.

"All right," he says, cool as cream. "See you then." He's the one hanging up this time.

He doesn't go back to sleep. The lack of sleep is adding up and he should grab what he can get, but his body seems to find itself done with that for now.

So he clears away the futon, and has a proper breakfast with toast and honey and three cups of coffee while he checks his favorite news sites and blogs. He clears up his apartment afterwards, and then he showers, wastes a bit more hot water than normal because he can treat himself to something nice too, and by the time he's done it's half past two. His timing today, impeccable.

He picks comfy jeans, doesn't bother with socks, the black shirt a repeat. He looks okay, should pass inspection; his mouth tastes of minty toothpaste and he's surprised how little he's thinking about what he's doing.

He thinks about everything. Everyone's opinions and every way he fucked up, all the time; it's a constant babble in his head. So why he's not thinking about sucking cock once a week and offering seconds, he doesn't know.

It's not that he likes it. He burns inside every time he has to play nice for some jerk or someone who just doesn't care, and he should at least mind this, when Kame is rough, and smug, and they insult each other over beer. But he's thought more about Kame's sharks and his schedule than the next round of…

And he doesn't get to think much now, because the doorbell rings.

Never more than five minutes off, Kame. So respectful. "Hello," Jin says as he opens the door. "So nice to see you again. Happy you found the time."

Kame looks just the same, suit and shiny shiny shoes; a briefcase, too. He gives Jin a sceptical look and says, "I have to be at the office in an hour."

"Your sharks swim on Sundays, too?" Jin asks, he's not even sure why.

Kame's look turns careful, and the pause is longer. "I'm kind of hoping they're taking today off," he says in the end. And he waits, until it sinks in.

Jin can't help laughing. "You're stealing a march and you're stopping for a booty call?"

"I was made an offer I couldn't refuse," Kame says, lips twitching. He puts the briefcase down and carefully slips out of his jacket. "So," he says when he turns from hanging it up. "Let's hear this new song of yours."

Jin blinks. "My... what?"

Kame looks pointedly around Jin's apartment. At the guitar in its corner. At the empty chair. At Jin. "You said you had a new song."

"Uh," Jin says. Talk about unexpected. But Kame's chin is coming up, slowly, and boy Jin knows those signs, and he adds quickly, "Yeah."

Kame studies him like he is a naughty schoolboy, or possibly a criminal. "Well?"

"Well," Jin says, because where Kame gets off assuming that he is the one being logical here, Jin doesn't know, "I didn't think you were coming for music." He thought they were well and truly done with that particular use for Jin's mouth.

Kame leans against the bookcase. "I'm versatile." He glances towards the guitar again, and assumes a pointedly patient air.

"You really..." Jin shakes his head, to clear the cobwebs out. "You want me to play you that song."

"The new one," Kame says peacefully. "I'd like that."

Right. Okay then. Jin gets the guitar, settles down, tunes up quickly.

Clears his throat, and fuck it's a shock, like the room stretches out into air and he's alone on a stage, in the dark, everyone watching.

Stupid. His room is a shoebox. This is just Kame. So he starts. Thank god he's not going near anything that means much with his songwriting these days.

Summer blue... He hasn't practiced and his chords aren't clean, but the melody is right there, the way it chased around his head. Softer than anything he'd pick for this, but who cares, he's fine, he sounds okay.

He plays it louder than ever before, now that there's an audience. Filling out his shoebox well, and Jin likes the sound of this, he wrote this.

The text is harmless, the chorus strong and simple, a nice guy singing about a nice summer and there's no kids and divorced wives or ghosts of lives past.

Eventually there's no text, either, because the rhymes on the last stanza are unfinished and dumb, so his friends, the la la las, are invited back.

He's smiling a little when he finishes, the last high note vibrating out.

"That was quite nice." Kame is uncrossing his arms, letting them sink. It's not a chill, but it wakes Jin up.

"Glad you approve," he says. There, that was lame.

Kame takes the few steps across to him, all the folds on his suit looking like they were meant for moving like this. Jin pulls back his hands as Kame takes the guitar. He puts it to the side, slowly.

"So, a summer sky?" he says.

What? Jin blinks up at him. Then he opts for the equally obvious. "Yeah. A blue one."

Kame nods, thoughtfully as if Jin hadn't sung the chorus four times.

"Keeping it G-rated these days, I see," he remarks eventually.

"Times change." Jin's not so fascinated by his Love Juice anymore, and his main audience has a collective age of seventeen. "Were you hoping to get off on my music?"

It gets him an amused laugh. "No, I think I can do better than that." Then it gets him the fingers, back in his hair. Always those. "It was just an observation. I'm wondering what you want to write in the long run."

Jin's turn to laugh. Well, snort. "No idea. Whatever comes into my head." Kame's thumb strokes over his cheekbone; it feels weird talking like that. "Whatever I feel like. I can do that now."

"Inspiration on the night shift." Kame's thumb teases Jin's bottom lip. Jin bites it because that was mean.

Kame stills, and gives him a stern look. Jin lets go; stares back and waits to see what next. His mouth opens a little when Kame strokes down on his chin. He can smell the nicotine again, and under it that new perfume, warm leather and dark earth, and even a little of the freshness of Kame's shirt.

His hands cup Jin's face; they feel smooth and girly like they haven't held a bat in years. Tilting his head softly, and Jin goes with it.

"I want to see more from you," Kame says, in that deep voice he has, and Jin flushes all over, so hot Kame must feel it where he holds him.

"Don't tell me you came for a whole concert," Jin says, because, but his voice is shit. Kame steps closer, and Jin doesn't get why he's still waiting, turned on as he is, why doesn't he just go for it?

Why's he standing there, looking Jin up and down, and down, making Jin shift uncomfortably.

"I want to see you too," he says, and it's the same drop, the room falls back again, goes dark, and Jin's pinned by one hot light in the middle. He leaves Jin's face sweaty, his hand trailing down Jin's front, as far as it can reach. A soft brush over fabric. A softer murmur. "Take it out."

His blood, it's everywhere, his heart racing trying to keep up. "Why?" It's barely a rasp. His hands are pulling up on his thighs and he stops them.

Kame has stopped touching him there. But nothing else has moved, he's still as close, still as hard. "Because I say so," he says; makes it sound like something plausible, something that makes sense. His hands stroke circles into Jin's shoulders, small, slow. "I want to watch you."

Watch... it goes into everything, all directions at once and now he's sweating worse, he swallows and balls his fists and damn.

"Sunday special," Kame says, his palm burning at the back of Jin's neck. "You told me."

"I didn't mean that," Jin points out and sounds weak to himself, and Kame says, "Oh, come on," like he's silly, and why this is more than letting Kame have his mouth, he doesn't know, maybe it's not, maybe Kame's right.

"Come on." A command now. Entitled asshole Kame, Sunday special, and Jin should get up, stop right there, and his fingers are clumsy on his jeans button and then the zipper is small, and slippery.

Above him Kame gives a little gasp. It makes the air around Jin prickle. He feels naked, slipping his hand inside his briefs and it's heavy already, and for a moment that surprises him.

What is he doing?

"Show me," Kame says, dry as dust.

That. He's doing that.

He frees it, pulls at it once, twice and it fills more, stands up a bit. He feels like the floor's vibrating under him. Everything else is still, and sharp. The air of his apartment is cold where he isn't holding on. Leaning above him, Kame has stopped breathing.

What now? He knows what now. But... really?

"Come on." Kame, sounding like he's whispering, very far away. But he's close, heat from his body in Jin's face, heat from his hands on Jin's shoulders. Fingers tight around his bones.

So, really.

Jin closes his eyes and starts.

Can't pretend to be alone, not for a second. Thinks he doesn't want to, even if that would be easier. He's on stage, might as well remember it. Kame's breathing helps, tight, high. Reminds him. It's so quiet he hears them both. The slide of his hand. Kame. Over and over.

He doesn't guess what Kame sees. Just tries to feel, tries to find the pleasure, draw it into a rhythm, find what's normal even with Kame there. It's not steady. His hand is steady but the feeling's up and down, up and jagged and full of rough spikes.

Kame makes a small, hidden noise, like he's the one Jin's touching. It's a jolt. He opens his eyes, nothing much there but the blue shirt and the bulge in Kame's pants but he stares anyway because this isn't a stage and Kame is touching his head. His fingers feel clumsy.

Jin speeds up. Longer, slicker slide. Curl in his stomach, holy fuck, and he feels Kame's body go stiff, his fingers clenching, his arm locked rigid. Jin leans there, it's easy. Shuts his eyes after all for the end and just listens, to the sounds Kame's trying not to let him hear and the movements he's trying to stifle and it's enough, it's plenty, and he jerks in his own grip and for a short while he thinks nothing.

A twitch in Kame's hand brings the thoughts back. He can still feel Kame's stare, even now his dick's spent and shrinking. It would help if somebody said something. Somebody, about how he's seen enough now.

Jin sits up straighter; Kame's hand slips off his shoulder and down his front again, but not far, not touching. Jin got it all on his shirt, and he's sweaty and slippery and fucking exposed, and his fingers in his crotch are twitching towards his zipper, for covering himself.

There's a pause when he watches Kame's chest rise and fall, and he wonders if he's ready to look at Kame's face.

"Okay," Kame says, on a breath, maybe remembering that this was his idea and he should be the one dealing with it. "Okay." There's a tug when he brushes Jin's hair back, but like nerves and clammy fingers, not malice.

Jin gets his briefs back in place and zips up. Looks up, finally. And Kame looks more blotched and flushed than Jin feels, and halfway disoriented with the way he's not doing anything at all, and Jin almost asks him if he's okay.

"I assume you want to get your cock sucked now," he says.

Kame looks at him for a moment. Blinks at him once and says, "Yeah." Then he clears his throat and straightens invisibly. "Yes, I do." He undoes his belt, his fly, no movement wasted. He's very hard. "There. Suck it."

Right. Jin gets his lips wet and leans forward.

God, Kame's horny, more than the other times, he can smell it, taste it. But steady, no rush coming at him.

Kame in charge again. That hand on Jin's head again. No clutching now, just moving him a little, holding him there. In place for Kame's cock. Kame's hips are doing all the moving and his breathing's harsh but regular, and soon Jin loses track among the in and out, in and out, Kame taking it just as he wants it.

"More," Kame says. "Suck harder."

Jin sucks harder, the noises growing louder. He's getting sweatier, shakier by the second and Kame says, "Use your tongue," and he doesn't know how but he tries, loses the rhythm, the tightness, until Kame loses patience.

"Stop it. Just suck." A demanding hand on the back of his head.

Then it's fast, much faster, the shift in Kame's hips and the quickening pace, the hardening grip. Time to hold his breath for when it goes deep.

And then it's over.

"You want to make it complicated, maybe you could give me a fucking minute," Jin says when he can breathe steady again. "Asshole."

"I don't have your kind of time," Kame returns, finishing with his buttons. Yeah, right. He could do with a few new lines too.

Jin bites back the comment, because maybe discussing the quality of lines and blowjobs can take a backseat to getting a fucking drink. When he gets up, his damp shirt moves on his skin and reminds him it's damp. Fuck that, too.

He wipes his hands on his jeans and opens his wardrobe a crack, yanks out a t-shirt. He lets the bathroom door rattle shut behind him. Yeah, his apartment. The doors don't even slam.

The shirt lands in a corner. Then he rinses his mouth, wipes his face with water, and when he turns the tap off he listens. It's still quiet. Very quiet.

Okay. He pulls the t-shirt over his head and then he's back out there. Kame doesn't have his jacket on yet, but he's near the door. Also very quiet.

"You didn't even bring beer," Jin states and heads straight for the fridge. Kame actually looks caught, serves him right. Good thing Jin's still got four from last time. "Here."

Kame takes the bottle with an unreadable frown. Jin notices he's not wearing any of his chunky rings, or any jewelry at all. "I was... you know." He's squirming, trying to look blasé. Jin wants to laugh. "It was short notice," he finally says."I know, my bad," Jin says. "I'll schedule with your secretary next time."

"How come you still have them all?"

Jin shrugs. "Night shifts. I had more work. I don't drink at six in the morning."

Kame nods. Drinks some beer. Frowns at Jin. "So you're making more money now?"

Jin shrugs again. "Yeah. A little. For now."

"That's good," Kame says, looking strangely unconvinced.

"Yeah, I think so too," Jin says, because duh.

"Not enough though, huh?"

Studiedly casual. Shit acting. And from Kame, that's... weird.

"If you're worried that your source of blow jobs is going to dry up..."

"No, you retard."

Whoops. Jin purses his lips and looks him up and down. Kame shrugs, and sighs a little, like Jin is just one more burden added to his burdensome life.

"So what are these extra expenses?" he asks at last. He gestures around vaguely, at sessions past.

Nosey, is he. Jin's tempted to tell him it's none of his business, but telling the truth is even more irresistible. "A duck," he states.

Yes, that was worth it. Kame's murderous look cracks him up.

He grabs his phone off the table and flips through the pictures, to one without his kids. "This duck." He holds it under Kame's nose.

"I... see," Kame says after a moment, though he doesn't look like he's seeing anything. Jin doesn't laugh, holds the picture steady so he can check it out a bit longer. "Why?"

"Because it's got sugar frosting feathers and at least fifteen flavors." He probably shouldn't enjoy this so much.

"Okay," Kame says, shaking his head like he walked into something, and drinks more beer.

Jin pockets his phone. He and the duck, they're tight. Buddies.

Kame gives him a final shifty look, but his face has closed now. "As long as you're not owing some loan shark or something."

"No," Jin says, when it sinks in. "No, I'm not in trouble. I just wanted... I don't spend my normal money on a duck."

That gets him a nod, approval of his responsible cash flow management. A couple of peaceful sips of beer.

"Are you working tonight, too?" Kame says then.

"Starting at six," Jin says. "How about you, when do you have to be... wherever?"

Kame gives a wry smile. "As soon as I can. Nobody is expecting me, that's kind of the point."

"Do you ever get time off?"

It just slips out. He never meant to ask. And Kame gives him an odd look.

"I am taking time off right now."

Right, okay. "Sorry, I forgot," Jin says, and toasts him. Sunday special. "So how is world domination coming along?"

Kame seems to be thinking about how much to tell him. In the end he smiles a little. "I don't know what you mean. I'm just a company employee like everyone else."

"I heard you're in a long game with Julie. I'm wondering what the score is."

The smile widens, while Kame carefully sets his bottle down. "Who told you that?"

"I hear stuff," Jin says. He also gets to get drunk on some really classy cognac. "Some people talk to me."

Kame's look is so incredulous, it's almost insulting. "Nobody talks to you. You don't talk to anybody. I would know."

Somehow Jin knows better than to suggest Kame's maybe not plugged into the Nobodies Information Network. "Fine, then I made it up. What's the score?"

Kame's eyebrows twitch, that's all. Not about to tell Jin any score. But he studies him thoughtfully. "You know, if it weren't for that bitch, we might even still have you on the payroll."

It gets him low, deep in the gut, where he thought it didn't matter anymore, nothing about this could touch him anymore. "Is that so," he says, and keeps his voice steady.

"It is," Kame says lightly. "She thought Johnny's American plans were nonsense from the start, and then you had to go make it easy for her. And for everybody else who thought you were more trouble than you're worth."

Oh, yeah, of course. Jin and his rebellion. "Well, weren't you smart you kept a safe distance."

That stare from Kame would make Juniors flinch. But Jin isn't one, he's not even in his fucking agency. And in the end it's Kame who says, "Whatever, Jin. You had all the chances. Some people would have killed to have Johnny love them the way he loved you."

"Yeah, that worked out really well for me. I'm so grateful."

"Well, you let him down," Kame shrugs. "You can only let so many people down before nobody gives a fuck anymore. But you know that."

Yeah, he remembers. Vividly. One flip and you're on the outside looking in, your goods sell for nothing and your singles not at all, people put condoms in your stuff and snigger as you walk past, and nobody's holding his hand over you.

"You know I tried," Jin says, his voice tight but it needs saying, because it's true. "I worked hard. I tried—" To make up for it.

"Maybe you should have tried harder," Kame snaps. "Too little, too late. If you'd been half as well-behaved as now before it all went to shit, things would have been easier for you."

"Yes," Jin says, his voice burning. "Great. I could have an awesome life. I could be working for you, I suppose." For some dick in a suit who's trying to take over the world because that's all he's got. "The joy I'm missing out on."

Kame scans him, head to toe, and when he puts his beer down, Jin is ready to get him his jacket. "You've never known what's good for you," he says, strangely calm.

No, Jin doesn't think blow jobs for money make his life worth living and being dragged along some muddy memory lane helps his blood pressure. Clearly he lacks the proper appreciation.

But whatever. What the hell does Kame even know.

"Should I leave now?"

It's the first time Kame's asked him a politeness question like that. It throws him a bit. A minute ago he wanted to kick him out.

"Don't you have somewhere to be?" he says, because that's probably expected. "Plans to hatch, producers to butter up, people to fire?"

For a moment Kame looks irritated. "Why do people always think I would have fired you?"

What? That's not what Jin was saying; though sure, that would just— wait, he wouldn't? Yeah, right. "Maybe something went wrong with your image too," he suggests helpfully.

Kame takes a sharp breath like there's things he has to say about this, heated things; but then he lets it go. He turns for his jacket instead, gets out his wallet, counts out the cash. "I won't be in the area again until Friday. Will this hold you or are there likely to be extra ducks?"

Jin takes the money. "I'll be fine."

After a moment, Kame seems to decide he's telling the truth. He steps into his shoes, straightens, his hand on the doorknob.

"On Friday, I'll fuck you," he says, and opens the door.

It takes a moment. Then it takes another moment before Jin finds any words at all, and Kame is halfway out the door when Jin says, "You think?" Kame raises his hand in goodbye and disappears down the stairs.


 

Comments

[dungbrains.livejournal.com]

FYEAH

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

:D ♥

[abi-manyu.livejournal.com]

uwaahh... i'm waiting for Friday!!!!
:p

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Greedy little reader! :p

[loveyourself6.livejournal.com]

WHAT. WHAT IS IT WITH YOU TWO AND THE UNEXPECTED ENDINGS. I WASN'T EVEN EXPECTING THIS CHAPTER TO STAR KAME AND ANOTHER BLOWJOB, AND THEN THERE WAS THE VOYEURISM WITH JIN WANKING AND I JUST LOVED HOW JIN GOT ALL FLUSHED WHEN KAME'S VOICE GOT LOW AGGGGH. BUT SERIOUSLY IS KAME GOING TO FUCK HIM IS JIN GOING TO LET HIM WHAT????????????

Okay, okay, now on a little less 'taken off guard' note...

I liked that Jin was so blunt with Kame, saying he needed money and all. Idk why, it's just nice that he doesn't feel he has to be all polite and has to bullshit 10 minutes or so before he can get to the point. Just like Kame I also thought Jin really was going to perform his new song. xD So I kinda like it that Kame made him. But then the Sunday special came to bite Jin back in the ass and I was NOT expecting it to go like that. I wonder if Kame was surprised too that Jin actually did it. And that Jin is still letting Kame use him like that, it must throw Kame off when he really thinks about it. Or just confuse him, idk.

I also liked bossy Kame, telling Jin to suck harder or use more tongue. Yep, you can gimme some bossy Kame any time. As long as it's not The Same Deep Water As You Kame, because that one was FREAKY in the non-sexy way for a whole while there. Not that Kame's got it all together here, either, seeing as the situation he's in with Jin, but still.

And OH MY GOD. "On Friday, I'll fuck you." Are you serious? That's just... Is that even going to happen? Is Jin going to let it get that far? Does he think Kame's bluffing or is he hoping it? And what is Kame even thinking! You can't go fuck Jin! You can't even let him blow you, you fucker! It's just... that's taking it too far, man, the fucking. Though I am curious how it'll go, if it'll happen at all and if so, how it will happen. And if they'll fight over their respective beers again afterwards.

UGH BUT THAT'S STILL A WEEK FROM NOW AND THAT IS SO PAINFUL.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Why, hello to you too. :-)

Idk why, it's just nice that he doesn't feel he has to be all polite and has to bullshit 10 minutes or so before he can get to the point.

:D Jin likes it too.

And that Jin is still letting Kame use him like that, it must throw Kame off when he really thinks about it. Or just confuse him, idk.

Yes, when he thinks about it, he finds all this a little unexpected himself. We think. ^^

Yep, you can gimme some bossy Kame any time.

Welcome to our house. Take your shoes off and get comfortable. >_>

But yes, we appreciate the distinction from SDW. This Kame is kind of a dick, but he doesn't actually have, uh, PTSD with a side order of closet panic. (And a lot of the time -- though not all the time -- he's being a dick he knows it too. Which is also different.)

(And also, it's just different because this Jin holds his own and isn't running scared...)

That's just... Is that even going to happen? Is Jin going to let it get that far? Does he think Kame's bluffing or is he hoping it?

Lalalala la la la la!

You can't go fuck Jin! You can't even let him blow you, you fucker!

Kame would beg to differ. But we will pass the message on to him. And then hide very quickly.

Sorry for the teasing. This comment was a lot of fun to read, though, and we appreciate the feedback and the outrage. >__> Stay tuned!

[nimlothemeli.livejournal.com]

OMG they're actually TALKING and they're getting points across and--- asdgfjkgkldhsgsdl

"Sunday special, for loyal customers. Treat yourself to something nice."
JIN!!!! :D You're such a sneaky bastard, luring Kame there like that (I think he secretly likes it, not just the money).

"You really..." Jin shakes his head, to clear the cobwebs out. "You want me to play you that song."

"The new one," Kame says peacefully. "I'd like that."
Well I'll be damned but isn't Mr. Kinky Turtle in an especially good mood today or what? I just love this part, he's obviously not just there for the blowjobs, he asks questions about what Jin wants to do, how his work is going, what songs he wants to write... there's this concern I think I can spot in his questions that gets my heart all cleanched up and shit. Even later when Kame goes "Why do people always think I would have fired you?" it's like he's aiming for something to happen with their playdates (not just sex and songs I mean), I'll have to wait and see if my further thought on the matter will be anything similar to how the rest of the story goes <3

He feels naked, slipping his hand inside his briefs and it's heavy already, and for a moment that surprises him.
This just speaks for itself doesn't it, I mean come on Jin. I know things are a bit complicated but this should make you more surprised! His thoughts should go like "what? Eeh? So Kame's magic works on me too?" or more preferably "Oh, maybe I'm a little gay after all"... Okay I'm sorry Jin, but OMFG I can't wait for the coming five weeks worth of updates!! *_________*

Kame makes a small, hidden noise, like he's the one Jin's touching. It's a jolt. [...] just listens, to the sounds Kame's trying not to let him hear and the movements he's trying to stifle and it's enough, it's plenty, and he jerks in his own grip and for a short while he thinks nothing.
*______* Jin we just talked about this. Okay, I'll stay quiet but seriously Jin.

Yes, that was worth it. Kame's murderous look cracks him up
:D I can picture that scene so well, LOL all over the place. Perfect Akame interaction right there.

"On Friday, I'll fuck you," he says, and opens the door.
Mr. Naughty Turtle that is called an evil and forbidden cliff-hanger you can't just leave Jin hanging like that, leave us hanging lika that!!!

Well girls, you've certainly made my day. My week. My year. Okay this is the best thing that has happened in all my life really, why aren't TV or movies or books this amazing? I blame the kids of today or something because when you can choose between wonderfully written stories like this and Twilight I think the choice ought to be freaking obvious. If you ever write (or have written) anything other than fanfiction that is available for reading then point me in the right direction. You're writing skills speaks for themselves.

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G update! Bubbly, strawberries, chocolate, ice cream, fireworks, Pi half-dressed in a kimono (what? okay that might be one of my surpressed kinks O.O) and Akame singing a duett - that's what you've earned <3<3<3<3<3

There's probably tons of things I've forgotten to write but oh well

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

OMG they're actually TALKING and they're getting points across and---

LOL! Best opening line ever. You fluffykitten, you. :p

But this comment contains some really *____* analysis and we almost don't want to say too much, but, yeah, VERY PLEASED AUTHORS.

His thoughts should go like "what? Eeh? So Kame's magic works on me too?" or more preferably "Oh, maybe I'm a little gay after all"

LOL! KAME IS JUST MAGIC ALL AROUND! All those Kamesexuals.

Jin we just talked about this.

Jin is busy. Otherwise occupied. Kame is giving you looks that you should let him focus. >_> (Also you're adorable.)

And we appreciate the duck appreciation! We loved writing that exchange. Poor Kame, heee.

But it's not even a cliffhanger! He's totally given you a spoiler, totes! >_>

Pi half-dressed in a kimono

JO THANKS YOU VERY MUCH!

We do not have any sekrit pro fic anywhere. (There is no Akame in profic. T____T) But we did blush quite a bit. Thank you for this super awesome comment! *__________*

[nightinbird.livejournal.com]

"On Friday, I'll fuck you," he says, and opens the door.

GAAAHYASFDAFDGDUUHSGLJHSKZFKGFJWOMGGGGX>DSAFD. *DEAD*

This chapter omg. wasn't even supposed to sneak a peak because uni stuff also remaining comments, but. OMG. THIS CHAPTER. KAME IS HOTNESS PERSONIFIED. JIN BEING AROUSED. OK, CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER, JIN CALLING KAME. SINGING. THAT JERKING OFF SCENE. JIN BITCHING AT KAME FOR NOT GIVING HIM CHANCES TO IMRPOVE ON HIS BLOWJOB TECHNIQUE AND NOT!SLAMMING RATTLEY DOORS. MAYBE I SHOULD LAY OFF THE CAPS. THE TALK. EVVVERYTHING. THAT LAST FIVE PARAGRAPHS, THAT SENTENCE, I READ THAT SENTENCE LIKE, TEN TIME BEFORE I READ ON, AND THEn I READ ThAT LAST BIT ANOTHER FIVe TIMES AND NOW I SHOULD REALLY GET BACK TO UNI STUFF eXCEPT THAT SENTENCE IS SPOOKING AROUND IN MY BRAIN SO I WENT AND ReREAD THE WhOLe CHAPTER.

will return with more coherence at a later date. also, other comments. also, i need to go. really. But just this: when those two eventually kiss, I'll black out in front of my screen. It's crazy. They are having regular R-rated sessions but their UST is through the roof.

gah.

bye, later.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

THiS WAS VERY InTEresTING COMMENT. WITH UST. ThaNK YoU.

wE COUlD bE NICE AND go ON HiATUS To MAKE UR LIfE mOAR RELAXED aLSO?

HaHAHA alSO WE Are ONLY LITTLE PsYCHoPATHS

[miyajima-juri.livejournal.com]

holy mother fucking bullshit okay... uhm.... yeah... there you go... what is it with the thought of jin being bottom that makes me burst out laughing?? anyways, thanks for the update.... :) it's nicer this time... the blowjob... didn't get too explicit, i think... it's just right... or maybe my head was too wrapped at the image of kame touching him? i dunno... but this is a really great update... :) can't wait for next... :)

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

what is it with the thought of jin being bottom that makes me burst out laughing?

Yeah, what is it? We are very curious. :DD You'll find that we write Jin as the bottom more often than not (though we have a couple of stories where it's the other way).

Glad you liked this update! But we won't promise that the next time they have sex is going to be non-explicit! >_> (We didn't even think this was non-explicit but maybe you're all pornier than we are ha!!!)

Thank you for commenting! ♥

[abyssinian13.livejournal.com]

wow, jin making the initiative to call kame..for a good cause of course..

and he has a new song..and kame liked it..sunday special indeed..kame loves jin voice so jin shouldn't be too surprised that he wants to hear it..

well that sunday special came back to haunt him when kame came around more horny than before..maybe kame's more excited because jin called him instead of kame calling jin..

so we have julie to partly blame for jin's departure from johnny's..small part maybe because jin's to blame for the rest..

i know kame's being careful with visiting jin stuff but what if kame's sharks find out about it..wouldn't it be bad for kame?

the last parting shot from kame made me: oh, yeah finally!!!thank you!!!
making sure kame's in jin's mind all week..smart kame..

thanks for the update!!!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Initiative is great! Just 4 weeks ago Jin had no initiative at all! :D #improvement

Jin is to blame for a lot... but he also got unlucky with the way the company was going at the time, and he fell foul of some internal politics. So, yeah... a few things came together. #neverreality #willnothappen

Hm, if Kame's sharks found out that he's just visiting, that probably wouldn't hurt Kame much. Jin is no longer really relevant. But if they found out what goes on while he's visiting, that would be a different matter. *g*

oh, yeah finally!!!thank you!!!

LOL, blow jobs aren't good enough? :) Poor Jin...

Thank you for commenting! ♥

[sablenoir4.livejournal.com]

i must be oozing into this like a fatboy - starting to feel nice'n'comfy here, thanking you, ladies.. hmm. sudden image of sitting in a fatboy in a corner of jin's apartment watching them - woah. i must be all kinds of whatever, it never struck me before how voyeuristic fanfic reading is 0_____0. [* point in case..]

nice that jin is not thinking about kame with the wind in his hair, or the ice baseball glove XD.

Meisa got so fed up with the arguing, she told them to go get their ice cream in America and not come back to bother her before university. laughed for a full minute there. you go meisa [maybe should have tried that on my brood, lol]. your meisa is very simpa'tica.. i approve.

Nobody knows him. Nobody pesters him. It's what he always wanted. this whole section is so chilled, i didn't even miss a beat at this, which in another place or time.. kiddies icecream and angst - immiscible

he wants to hug her that moment, just for what they made together; all the parts he didn't turn into a mess. see? JUST TOO MANY FLUFFY FEELS. YES JIN, you listening? all the parts go lookie..

and gawd, the excuse of the duck - A DUCK! you evil geniuses, you, ROFL, and kame makes it. and.. am not going to try and comment on that piece of hotness. *distracted as i [still] am by wanting to know what kame is doing while jin is jerking off [if they can be blunt, so can i]. you feed us some snippets, and pan between them both, but, given a chance i would still have had my hand on the metaphorical remote control pause button, stop, rewind, hold that there, how is he standing now? how close? play. pause. i can't see his face. where are his hands? oh, shoulders, ah, but are they gripping? ok. yes. and his hips? ..

not sure friday will be good for my bloodpressure. but hey, suffering is part of life, no?

i like they chat, shoot off some things. and the odd deeper thing.

keeping tuned for more from the deep..

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

It's your own fault that we now have a visual of you lurking about in Jin's apartment, among the dustbunnies. :p

No, Jin is not thinking about Kame at all. Ever. Why would he. XD

Hey! It's a very nice duck. :) And what do you think Kame is doing while Jin is jerking off? He's appreciating. *g* ...and standing pretty close... all the better to see him...

Why does nobody seem to expect Jin just to kick Kame out on Friday? >_>

[prologuesized.livejournal.com]

Oh god, there you go once again and prove me that there's absolutely no way for me to ever be able to predict what your fic is going to develop into. It all feels smooth, natural and reasonable, yet I just can't see it coming. Woah.

First of all... Jin calling Kame for an appointment. Just. He really wanted that duck and is more okay with their arrangement than most people would be. I guess it's some kind of a relief, getting money like that... I just feel kind of sorry for him, but maybe I shouldn't feel as sorry as I do because he's not that upset about it?

Kame's look is so incredulous, it's almost insulting. "Nobody talks to you. You don't talk to anybody. I would know."
Somehow Jin knows better than to suggest Kame's maybe not plugged into the Nobodies Information Network. "Fine, then I made it up. What's the score?"
Kame's eyebrows twitch, that's all. Not about to tell Jin any score. But he studies him thoughtfully. "You know, if it weren't for that bitch, we might even still have you on the payroll."
Ohhhh, of course Kame would know. He really keeps his ears open when it comes to Jin. I like these little bits where it suddenly shines through with a bit of an electric snap that Kame actually does give a shit, has probably always given a shit deep down. More than a shit, actually. He's way too preoccupied with Jin for Jin to be just another person in his life. Also, I love their conversations, how they keep pretty much toying and insulting each other.

"On Friday, I'll fuck you," he says, and opens the door.
It takes a moment. Then it takes another moment before Jin finds any words at all, and Kame is halfway out the door when Jin says, "You think?" Kame raises his hand in goodbye and disappears down the stairs.
Straightforward, as always... And impatient. That's Kame for you. I didn't really expect him to give a warning like that, but maybe it's for the best? Still. Jin probably has a little bit of thinking to do before Friday then.

[circuside.livejournal.com]

I like these little bits where it suddenly shines through with a bit of an electric snap that Kame actually does give a shit, has probably always given a shit deep down. More than a shit, actually. He's way too preoccupied with Jin for Jin to be just another person in his life.

THIS. SO MUCH. ♥♥

[circuside.livejournal.com]

YOU GUUUUUUYS DDDDDD8

Tanttu and I are pretty much flailing right now XDD ♥♥♥

"Don't tell me you came for a whole concert," Jin says, because, but his voice is shit.

Jin, I love you. I love it how he's so NOT submissive and adjhsfhj his attitude ♥♥♥

Nosey, is he. Jin's tempted to tell him it's none of his business, but telling the truth is even more irresistible. "A duck," he states.

Yes, that was worth it. Kame's murderous look cracks him up.

I might or might not have laughed out loud XDD GO, JIN, GO.

For a moment Kame looks irritated. "Why do people always think I would have fired you?"

:3333333333 ♥

"On Friday, I'll fuck you," he says, and opens the door.

JDKSAHFJSDHGSUEHGFJSDFHSIKJFHJSGFJSGFHSGFHEITHUAJSDGJSKGJSDGHJSDGFHGHDGSKJ KAME YOU BASTARD I LOVE YOU. Go and poke that ass! And yeah, Jin, we think.

I love it that it was Jin who called Kame. I LOVE HIS ATTITUDE. I love it that he gets REACTIONS out of Kame and that Kame's so not fully in control XDD ♥ And they're talking. THEY'RE TALKING.

And your smut. I don't even... I love the way you write smut. It's so real. I even love the way you form the sentences, how they end or begin abruptly and that makes it so real. Adds to the mood a lot. *flails* ♥

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

:DDD Flailing is good!

And nope, Jin is not submissive. Kame can't scare him and Kame can't act all high and mighty because Jin remembers him when he had funny eyebrows and was a DORK, Jin knows him and he knows Kame knows that, and they'll never be submissive with each other.

We might have grinned widely while writing the thing with the duck, too. Kame's face... we can totally picture it.

I love it that he gets REACTIONS out of Kame and that Kame's so not fully in control XDD ? And they're talking. THEY'RE TALKING.

♥♥♥

This is how we were hoping this would come across. Never mind the blow jobs. *g*

But okay, people liking our smut makes us happy too. *g*

Thank you for this great comment! ♥♥♥

[anais-bayrakdar.livejournal.com]

HUH?! So soon?! o_O

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!! Thank youuuuuuuuuu~
(http://anais-bayrakdar.livejournal.com/pics/catalog/430/56960)

Off to read :3

[anais-bayrakdar.livejournal.com]

I love all the little glimpses about the past. I really want to know what the hell happened in the last 10 years from Kame's POV!! *O*

"On Friday, I'll fuck you," he says, and opens the door.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~~ (http://anais-bayrakdar.livejournal.com/pics/catalog/682/29675)
hehehe I wouldn't like to be in Jin's place this week with all the nerve-racking thinking he will be doing XD
. . .
Screw that! even so I would!! XDDDD

[cagnurit.livejournal.com]

*________*
Wait, wait, wait! The ending of this chapter has stricken me so hard O_______o *speechless*

Ehem, let's start again. I thought this chapter has some little 'improvements', with Jin initiatively calls Kame (ikr, the duck has Kame involved XD), and Jin biting Kame's finger. But it has advanced to Jin doing himself with Kame watching, and Kame will do him in the next?! OMG, the level speeds up so fast now!!! XD

I'm sorry, this is mean to Jin, but I can't help cracking up with "There. Suck it." How can Kame say that and I feel it hilarious >____> Like he is kindly offering Jin a meal. Oh my, this sounds so wrong, I don't mean that.

Yeah, and their regular constant banter. The introduction of the duck, not the mafia or yakuza. And many many other details <3


Uhm, I have a question. How come Kame is always 'hard' when he comes see Jin, like immediately? I think it should need something to prepare (?) to be like that, or something? >____< *inexperienced*

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Hee, speechless. Speechless is good, as long as you can still type comments! :DDDD

Stuff is happening quickly now, yeah. They aren't patient guys. :)

LOL a meal. A lollipop. A man-meat lollipop. Um, sorry. We'll... behave ourselves now. XD

Glad you like the banter. We love writing it!

How come he's always hard... okay, he's probably not hard yet when he's coming in the door... though who knows. *g*

Guys can get hard pretty quickly, if they are turned on. Teenage guys get hard if the wind blows in their direction, it can get pretty embarrassing. Kame, being 36 in this story, is well past that stage, but Jin turns Kame on. Pretty much everything about Jin turns Kame on. Just seeing Jin turns him on. Thinking about what he can do with Jin turns him on. And bear in mind that for all those fondling sessions, Kame was really standing quite close to Jin, and when you factor in that we write Kame as a fairly sexual, high-libido guy, yeah, it happens. (He gets harder when Jin applies some extra, erm, preparation, but yeah, you can totally get a I-feel-that-poking-me/I-see-that-sticking-up boner without hands-on work at all. *g*)

Having said that, the second time we wrote, when Jin surprised Kame by skipping the song, it took Kame a bit longer, too, because he was taken aback and needed to find his balance, and he hadn't had the fondling foreplay. :-)

Does that make sense? (Sorry about the essay... orz)

[starg8fan-liz.livejournal.com]

*_* you guys always have the best endings to these O.M.F.G 0_0 and I thought what they did today was special. well, can't wait for Friday! XD and looking forward to the next part ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

I thought what they did today was special

But it was! :D Thank you very much, stay tuned for... next week. *g*

[lieben-kame.livejournal.com]

Okay maybe I should just label all future chapters involving Kame as favorite chapters because they SO ARE.

First Jin calling Kame first and inviting him over and SUUUURE yeah, it's cause he needs the money but he could have waited for Kame to call first like usual, but he didn't and that makes me ridiculously happy.

Everyone's opinions and every way he fucked up, all the time; it's a constant babble in his head. So why he's not thinking about sucking cock once a week and offering seconds, he doesn't know.
BUT I DO 8D Oh Jin, come on, really?

he should at least mind this, when Kame is rough, and smug, and they insult each other over beer. But he's thought more about Kame's sharks and his schedule than the next round of…

He is so whipped and he doesn't even see it! *shakes Jin* REPEAT AFTER ME. YOU. GIVE. EXACTLY. ONE. FUCK. ABOUT KAME. JUST LIKE. HE GIVES. ONE FUCK. ABOUT YOU. GOT IT?!?

"Hello," Jin says as he opens the door. "So nice to see you again. Happy you found the time."
Kame's thumb teases Jin's bottom lip. Jin bites it because that was mean.


LOOK HOW NICE AND CUTE HE'S BEING I CAN'T. And he's STILL trying to deny his Kame feels, JIN PLS. And YAAAY I like the turn of events with Kame asking him to get himself off and further evidence of how whipped Jin is, because even though he actually questioned it this time, he still went and did it anyway. I swear if Kame asked him to do a strip tease would he do that too? X'D (Actually Kame you should TOTALLY do that, I would. >.>;;) He's reminding me a bit of SDW!Jin, where one half of him is like "WTF is wrong with this asshole, you want me to do WHAT?" and then the other half is "Eh, well, I guess I, yeah I can do that, no probs. You want anything else or...?"

And yeah, why DOES he find it more weird to touch himself that to suck off Kame, I mean, because in both scenarios he's the center of attention anyway. Is it because he thinks it's weird that Kame wants him to do something for himself, as opposed to doing something for him? :O Also I must admit, I found Kame very, very sexy here. >.>;; Not even going to try and sugar coat it. XDD Idk, but I love it when he's bossy during sexy things. He was perfect and OH LET ME GET INTO THAT.

"I was... you know." He's squirming, trying to look blasé. Jin wants to laugh. "It was short notice," he finally says.

HE'S ACTUALLY KINDA APOLOGIZING OMG. :'D



"If you're worried that your source of blow jobs is going to dry up..."
"No, you retard."

I srsly LOL'ed because imagining professional fancy dickwad Kame using "retard" is just, AHAAAAA. X'D Loved it! I can imagine his face so well. This too made me laugh: Yes, that was worth it. Kame's murderous look cracks him up. "Why?" "Because it's got sugar frosting feathers and at least fifteen flavors." He probably shouldn't enjoy this so much. Also, the fact that Kame actually smiled some, aksjhdkjshkjsh. <333 He was actually the nicest he's ever been this whole chappie, I've got nothing bad to say about him.

It just slips out. He never meant to ask. And Kame gives him an odd look.

SEE LOOK EVEN KAME IS NOTICING YOU CARE JIN YOU'RE SO STUPID XD

"Whatever, Jin. You had all the chances. Some people would have killed to have Johnny love them the way he loved you."
"Yeah, that worked out really well for me. I'm so grateful."
"Well, you let him down," Kame shrugs. "You can only let so many people down before nobody gives a fuck anymore. But you know that."


THIS IS WHY I AM STILL ON TEAM KAME. 300 PERCENT AGREE SO MUCH. The fact that he always speaks the truth I think even outs his coldness. :3 This line too: You've never known what's good for you," he says, strangely calm. ;_;

"On Friday, I'll fuck you," he says, and opens the door.



And the fact that Jin's response is basically "Oh okay, cool, see you Friday." ASDFGFHGFHG JIN R U EXCITED CUZ I AM IT'S ABOUT GOD DAMN TIME.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Okay maybe I should just label all future chapters involving Kame as favorite chapters because they SO ARE.

LOL! You can make a ranking at the end. >_>

Oh Jin, come on, really?

Jin is confused. What does the girl on the internet mean?

REPEAT AFTER ME. YOU. GIVE. EXACTLY. ONE. FUCK. ABOUT KAME.

Yes, okay, ONE. Jin can maybe admit to ONE. ... half a one. MAYBE.

OMG now you're collecting suggestions what Kame should do to Jin? Bad Lexy! Evil Lexy!

It's funny he should remind you of SDW!Jin, though. We thought while writing that this Jin is (blessedly) far less helpless, and actually able to cope even when Kame's being a dick. But that is just us and the author is dead and decomposed, AYKB!

And yeah, why DOES he find it more weird to touch himself that to suck off Kame, I mean, because in both scenarios he's the center of attention anyway. Is it because he thinks it's weird that Kame wants him to do something for himself, as opposed to doing something for him?

Heee. Ok, this is where we see a bit of a SDW parallel. It's about exposure, really. If Kame sticks his dick in Jin's mouth, yeah, sure, he's The Mighty Top, but he's also a horny guy getting wrapped up in proceedings and who -- by his sheer actions -- admits that he has needs. And jerking off with someone watching can be a bit embarrassing anyway -- some people don't like to do that when they're in a relationship!

HE'S ACTUALLY KINDA APOLOGIZING OMG. :'D

The lack of beer was a major faux-pas! Tsk, tsk, Kame.

I srsly LOL'ed because imagining professional fancy dickwad Kame using "retard" is just, AHAAAAA. X'D Loved it! I can imagine his face so well.

:DDD

ASDFGFHGFHG JIN R U EXCITED CUZ I AM IT'S ABOUT GOD DAMN TIME.

*sigh* You'll be so disappointed when Kame crashes his car on Thursday, really.

[cristina~ (from livejournal.com)]

What an unexpected chapter! *0*

At first I didn't like it much, but now I'm loving the way you are updating the fic :D

I think "asdfghjklñlkjhgfdsasertfgvbghjuioklmnbvfgdvfr" is the best way to define my feelings for this chapter so asdfghjklñloiuhygtreswazertfgvbhjuikmnbvgfdrfvgukqaswedfrtghyuikolpmsdfghj *___________________*

And OMG the end!! And Jin's reaction <3333333333

How do you want me to wait until Friday?!! OTZ


I'll do my best to wait patiently but I don't know if I'll manage it xD

*3*

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

HAHA, yeah, we thought people might not see that coming. *g* But sudden duck needs, what's a guy to do?


At first I didn't like it much, but now I'm loving the way you are updating the fic

Ha, you have been won over by our S ways! >_>

You may also wait impatiently. :p BUT YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT WILL REALLY HAPPEN ON FRIDAY!!!

Thank you for commenting! :D

[ohmychinz.livejournal.com]

Like every other pervy fangirl, OOOOH~ FRIDAY~~ *evil gleam*

Sugar frosting feathered ducks with 15 flavours. Ingenious.

Jin calling Kame! ~DEVELOPMENT~
I can't decide if I wanna hug him for being such a sweet daddy to go cast away his pride and call Kame, or slightly disappointed he didn't put up that much of a resistance. I mean, he didn't even prepare a song and go through with his excuse. (Though, that could be because somewhere deep inside, he probably doesn't mind it that much winkwink)

Kame being all dominating yet someone his soft side still shows. <3
Thank you!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

But... but... lots of things could happen before Friday! Kame could get abducted by ALIENS! (No, really, watch out for this story's sudden turn into Science Fiction.)

well, if he's the one calling Kame, there's hardly much point putting up resistance. >_>

Kame being all dominating yet someone his soft side still shows.

:DDD

Thank you for the feedback! Great you enjoyed it!

[krystal-32206.livejournal.com]

Waiting for Friday... (^_−)−☆

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

You are all very certain we're not just fucking with you... >_>

[rydion9.livejournal.com]

THE ENDING askjfbnkjvgbwibvgawnbidf
XDDDD

and jin calling kame is the cutest thing ever ♥

great job, you two! haha omg

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Heeee, thank you! Glad you had fun!

(Cute? HA!)

[aya-3003.livejournal.com]

The tentacles of the jellyfish are calm enough to be able to use the keyboard again.
However, it wouldn't surprise me if I went *_____________* all over again. :D

At least this chapter explained the duck ice cream. Does it actually exists or did you invent it?
I'm in for the invention to have a solid reason to let Jin call Kame.

Akames way of communication is just priceless. ♥
Sometimes it reads like you two talking to each other. :D

Jin completely accepted their nice blow job arrangement and makes usage of it. By now he should have noticed that he's still got power over Kame if he plays him right. This is fun. :D

He burns inside every time he has to play nice for some jerk or someone who just doesn't care…
Dear unconsciousness, please get aware of the fact that the turtle cares. You are hot as hell, he cannot help himself, but it cares. It's all over this chapter. ¬.¬; Insulting just works better as communication. Such a stress relief. At the same time, please realize that you kind of care as well. -.-;

This sounds suspiciously like they are hiding their real affections to each other. #fairytale

I'm glad we are not missing out on the music even if it's about some summer meadow. ^^
Right now I'm wondering about a private vendetta of Kame against Julie, because she fired Jin. To get him back into JE, selling music or trying to sell music. I wanna have him back into payroll in the end of this story.
and where the hell are all the words? GRRRR it cannot be kids chapters all the way!!!!111!!!!!!!111

This is just Kame.
I really like the just in this sentences. :D

… his friends, the la la las, are invited back.
and I hate you for the LaLaLaLa

Understandable that Kame cannot keep his fingers away from Jin. Freshly showered hair.
They are totally playing with each other Jin bites it because that was mean. Totally, and here's the attraction Jin flushes all over, but who wouldn't when Kame speaks deeply? *___*

I'm still thinking about he main reasons of Kame molesting Jin. That's he's attracted to Mr. Red is given. The same goes for some kind of background story of Kame having fantasies.
Right now it's like the turtle is testing out the borders of Jin and Jin just doesn't stop him and goes with the flow. Jin is not really protesting in this chapter as well, he's just thinking that he shouldn't, but he does it anyway. Body language speaks differently. XD Like this it's no surprise that Kame demands more and more from him. I mean what kind of protest from Mr. Red? No a very serious one. LOL The turtle is advancing slowly, but it works.

"I assume you want to get your cock sucked now," he says
Helpfully providing Kame with the information of what he's supposed to do now. Jin needs money, get going turtle.

"You want to make it complicated, maybe you could give me a fucking minute," Jin says when he can breathe steady again. "Asshole."
Even arguing about blow jobs. Priceless. *______* and him being pissed. *__*

Jin pockets his phone. He and the duck, they're tight. Buddies.
Does this scene still make you giggle as well?

Kame's look is so incredulous, it's almost insulting. "Nobody talks to you. You don't talk to anybody. I would know."
Because Kame is checking up on the love of his life every few weeks.

Kame takes a sharp breath like there's things he has to say about this, heated things;
L.E.T. T.H.E.M. T.A.L.K.

"You think?" Kame raises his hand in goodbye and disappears down the stairs.
Watch your body language Jin. XD
adfa;lsdkfjasldkfjalsdkfjasdlfkjasl;dkfjals;dfkjasldkfjasl;dfjasf;lkdsfa
To get some keysmash into the mix.

I'm glad that I'll be very busy till Friday and I'm not looking forward to the birthday party.
Let Jin have a few nice thoughts ¬.¬;

Ok, that's the last point for today on my list: writing this comment. XD
DONE! \^.^/ Let the tentacles flail again.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

We invented the duck. We figured that in 10 years there'll be totally awesome ice cream parlours with totally awesome ducks. The future is waiting!

Sometimes it reads like you two talking to each other.

This is slightly disconcerting...



You... are pretty on-target about how Jin's dealing with Kame's turtle advance. *g* And how the turtle itself advances. :)

Helpfully providing Kame with the information of what he's supposed to do now.

Indeed. Kame lost track there for a moment. And of course they argue about blow jobs, Kame was being totally unreasonable.

[b_akakame.livejournal.com]

Real time Anni should get used to real time commenting again. *g*

Anyway… this week was…week 5 at first and now it’s week 4 ½. #justsaying Sudden change of directions because OMG turning point? A simple number fail? Mmh…

I don’t know where to start. #aaaaah But I wonder what exactly Kame thought when he saw it was Jin calling. Although that’s quite nice. Jin calling for the first time. And I love how he’s all ‘hey, if Kame can just hang up, I can do that, too!’ And nice that Kame actually made time for him, kind of. But how could he even resist?

I can imagine how Jin felt a bit caught off guard when Kame actually wanted to hear that song. Or even came for the song in the first place. If my previous assumptions are correct and Kame actually did come for the music instead of sexual favours then it must have been a pretty happy moment for him when Jin called and offered a song. A new one on top of that. A new song he wants Kame to hear. And well, Kame *wants* to hear what Jin would write about these days. In which direction he’d develop as soon as he lets music play such an important part in his life again. Whether that new song carries a meaning or is just about bros and hoes and hamburgers this time.

Kame's thumb teases Jin's bottom lip. Jin bites it because that was mean.
Being playful already, huh?

…and under it that new perfume..
no more dampfnudeling Kame. ;___; Meant to write that one when you wrote about the new perfume for the first time, but forgot. ORZ

I still wonder if Kame has planned the blow-jobs and everything beforehand. Because I have another theory. Or well, still the old one. *g* But I just feel like that theory got support from this chapter. :P
Back then when they were still friends and everything was cool, Kame realized he liked guys. And one guy in particular. Which made their relationship pretty difficult (at least for Kame). But he’s always been so considerate and didn’t dare to make it complicated for them and the whole group by confessing. However stuff happened, Jin leaving KAT-TUN and on top of that getting married secretly after which broke Kame’s heart, but he hoped Jin would be happy anyway, because Jin still means much to him. All of that would depend a bit on how mushy Kame is on the inside. Though I assume that even though it broke his heart was hard for Kame, he wanted Jin to be happy with his family and wished him luck for that. But then more stuff happened and Julie kicked Jin out when she had the chance to and THAT was too much for Kame. Because he realized Jin wouldn’t be all happy and that finding a new agency and recording company would be way too hard for Jin. So maybe that was even one of the reasons why he tried to go against Julie and worked even harder in order to climb up. In that process he changed however and became some kind of asshole. Because well you can’t survive in that business by being Mr. I’m-pleasing-everyone-with-nice-smiles-and-a-super-sweet-and-considerate-attitude but you’ll have to stop at nothing in order to reach your goal. Especially if you have an opponent who is like that and who is in a much higher position than you are. So Kame became some kind of asshole, too, because “We’re doing this as I say!’ brings your point across better than “If you would kindly consider the solution I have thought about, that would be very nice. Only if you have time of course and I would understand if you didn’t like that.”. In addition to that, Kame is Mr. Perfectly-in-control-of-himself, so I assume that he knows he comes across as an asshole, but that’s kind of the point in order to step up. (btw, I wouldn’t want to say that the thing with Jin is the only thing that made Kame aim for company president, but other circumstances and general mis-management as well, but I still think Jin plays an important role there. #justfortherecord)

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But okay, there Kame is now, in a good position and with much more power than before. Power to change important things. And of course he has followed news on Jin every now and then (or all of the time even). So he also knew about the money problems, knew that Jin is in trouble and doesn’t touch his guitar anymore. And well, that’s not what Kame wanted for Jin, so he steps in, because he can and he wants to pull Jin out of the hole he fell in. And because he might have more plans with/for Jin.
And okay, Jin accepts the thing with the singing and it works quite okay even. But when Mr. Perfectly-in-control-of-himself sees Jin again after all those years, he realizes there are still feelings or just desire and Kame just can’t help touching and that he’s not perfectly in control of himself anymore when Jin is so close. So Kame can’t resist (because I guess it’s been some time for him, too) and just tries how far he can go. How far he can let it go and if parts of his mask might slip off. So he goes further with the touching and then it starts with the blowjobs. And the thing that might have surprised Kame: Jin’s not protesting. When they talk, Jin is talking back, throwing insults at Kame, but when he has to suck Kame’s dick there’s nothing. So that maybe makes Kame think about the ‘why’ here and also he’s getting curious about how far Jin would go. How far Jin would allow Kame to go. And how much Kame would allow himself to lose that control and just give in, take what he’s been desiring all those years. But for that he has to know whether Jin is actually turned on by that. Whether Jin would also allow himself to lose himself in desires he didn’t know he had. Therefore the hand job. (And because Kame is curious and kinky and wants some more for his money.) So Jin doesn’t even really protest there as well. He’s hesitant, but no protest and he can even jerk off with Kame there. With Kame in his thoughts. And okay, to be honest, I have never thought about that *that* much, but I wonder if a guy would really be able to get hard and jerk off even if he was totally disgusted and not turned on at all by the situation around him. So Kame thinks the same and knows he can go further. And even pushes Jin around during the blowjob. (And he’d be really satisfied, because he got his control over that situation back. A little at least.) And even after that, Jin’s still not really protesting, but well.

And parts of this might even not apply because in the end Kame planned the blowjobs from the start… mweh!

So there, Kame has some time to himself and then they can be a bit more relaxed with each other over beer afterwards again. More or less relaxed that is.

Studiedly casual. Shit acting. And from Kame, that's... weird.
Because it’s Jin he’s talking to and because sometimes Kame loses control over his emotions and because he even likes it when Jin doesn’t become too independent. And because he wouldn’t be able to take it if Jin suddenly turned him down and away from him again. He’s got Jin at a point he wanted him now and he’s Kame and he won’t let that slip through his fingers so easily.

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can't help myself to wonder about what'll happen on friday... kekekek...

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Yes, what indeed. *g* Stay tuned!

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I think I need to reread the whole fic from the beginning. I must admit I have some struggling in the beginning with understanding why everything is so easy for them both. I mean Kame came, being all bosssy and very perverted in his intentions and not that Jin really minds, because even if he needs the money I doubt he is so desperate to agree on everything that Kazuya wants, or is he? Or maybe he is not that opposite and here I'm curious why, if they have no any story in past and Jin is not even gay. Maybe Jin is just weird like this or he has his own reasons, like too many years alone and the inability to open himself to someone else, because life was hard on him and it can't just pass without leaving some traces. Idek. Maybe he feels better when Kame is near, Kame who is like some part of his past that make him feel connected with life and gives some income.

From this part it's obvious that Jin is enjoying the situations and feels fine using the opportunity, calling first and asking Kame to come.
That was funny XD

"Well," Jin says, because where Kame gets off assuming that he is the one being logical here, Jin doesn't know, "I didn't think you were coming for music."

I like how bluntly Jin is voicing his opinion, being honest and how Kame is trying to keep a face XD XD

Kame thinks that Jin is in troubles and being again bossy and pervy, not that Jin is opposite. Kame is full of contradictions and I don't get what he has in his mind at all. I mean I understand what he wants at some moments but the whole picture. Is he a good man who wants to help Jin giving him a job or he is a twisted weirdo with some sadistic habits >_>

Jin is a perfect goal for such a weird he is ok with everything I guess XD XD

Today is a Friday, so. Have the perfect timing with reading this part XD XD

This fic is like a riddle for me, when there are some parts other are missing and I'm desperately trying to find ends and think about all the possible ways, like what happened with Kame, was is that bitter or maybe he is just like this, because he is and nothing was a reason.

Kame's look is so incredulous, it's almost insulting. "Nobody talks to you. You don't talk to anybody. I would know."

Maybe just the life with sharks makes me be always on alert and watch his back and Jin is here like a little sunshine in Kame's life >_> sunshine with blow job's benefits XD XD

Thank you for this long and hot part! It's funny in some parts and I like a lot when they are taking even if it's more like insulting and after they are not talking a lot, but still XD

It seems they both deserve each other in all ways, by their personalities and behavior XD XD

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Not me, but him>_> this is not even a typo, autocorrect hates me :(((((