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The Same Deep Water As You - Chapter 1
by [livejournal.com profile] solo____ & [livejournal.com profile] jo_lasalle
Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya / Akanishi Jin
Rating: Explicit
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Alternate Universe fiction. None of this is true.
Warnings: If there are any warnings for this story, you will find them here.
Summary: Kame's got his reasons for seeing prostitutes. Jin's got his reasons for being one. Life is pretty screwed up.
Notes: Story notes, acknowledgements and frantically reiterated disclaimers are here.

The picture is still on the screen, looking out at him, a soft face in a mass of dark wavy hair which seems to invite touch even now. The mouth isn't bad, either. Probably a very flattering shot, but that's the point, isn't it.

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Date: 2011-03-10 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nightinbird.livejournal.com
I couldn't believe it when I saw the post. I've been looking forward to this for so long, I was actually afraid of starting to read because in my head it had built up into this expectation of an epic, amazing fic with some mysterious whores and a lot of angst in it.

And... god, you have me hooked already; it really is AU, but very intriguingly so, and I'm excited like WOA for the rest!

It already feels like epic, amazing fic to me.

but I don't know how I'm going to get through a year of weekly posting, the suspense is killing me already XD I guess Thursday'll become my favourite day of the week! ;)

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Date: 2011-03-10 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldfreckled.livejournal.com
Oh god, I think I literally squeed when I saw this. I love whore-verses and this sounds wonderful.

Beautifully written (as usual ;D), you manage very well to convey the mood, I especially liked Kame's scenes: his thoughts about the rain, the uncomfortable conversation in the car, the description of his apartment.

I didn't expect Kame married. At all. And I'm curious how that will end (which I will find out in a year if you keep up with your posting-schedule T___T).

Jin. I love his characterization, his interaction with other people, especially his bratty charm (i.e. "I didn't do anything!" ;D). The JinxTegoshi-thing is interesting, I wonder if this will end well, especially since the two of them apparently don't get along to well IRL (-> "Usero" XD).

Tatsuya the high-class whore is awesome and he hasn't even appeared yet. *_____*

I will definitely keep reading this. ♥

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Date: 2011-03-10 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] becquinho.livejournal.com
♥_♥ *opens champagne and toasts the two of you* !!!1!111!!

...I am so thankful no one else was around when I refreshed my f-page and saw this hovering at the top...I must have looked absolutely psychotic with glee *g*..
inside I'm still giddily going..oh my god epic fic!!! ♥

The first chapter was enthralling, I wasn't quite sure what to anticipate but I'm very intrigued by the both the original characters and the ways in which you've woven familiar faces into the story ;-)...also going at *o* at Tatsuya and Kimura figuring into this ...hmmm...Kame being married is interesting, my mind is already whirring about how that will play into the story.
this year long posting schedule is going to do amazing things to my patience /rolls
♥ ♥

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Date: 2011-03-10 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deeacrazyme.livejournal.com
wow...kame is married and yet he gets that sort of service?
wow... i guess i am going to like this one although i got a feeling jin's an uke? maybe it will work out although most jin uke!fics don't really manage to portray him good.
i'm looking forward for the next chapter.
thanks for sharing

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Date: 2011-03-10 10:16 pm (UTC)
ina: (Akame - Ohayou -by chinawolf)
From: [personal profile] ina
Very intriguing first chapter. I am really looking forward to more.

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Date: 2011-03-10 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kawaiikame.livejournal.com
Definitly looking forward to read more, though you'll be posting in new chapter per day or? I hope it'll be per day :3 I can't wait to read more ♥

Ok I just read it will be one post each week .. god, it's gonna be difficult XD;
Edited Date: 2011-03-10 10:51 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2011-03-11 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scorch66.livejournal.com
oh gosh. there is infidelity T___T I really can't handle cheating in fics but I'm so tempted to continue reading this since you guys are brilliant writers and I love your characterizations. ♥

I'm already starting to feel depressed lol (Kame's poor wife ;__; I hope she knows </3) so I'm grateful that this is going to be posted weekly; it'll give me some time to recover.

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Date: 2011-03-11 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diisa-pinky.livejournal.com
omg this is really something *____*
i need this more often, dark and angsty stuff
too much sweet lately... not good

the point is: kame's married already and jin is a whore -> win ♥

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Date: 2011-03-11 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akamaru07.livejournal.com
CHAPTER TWO PLEEEEEEEEEEASE!!! xD

Sounds exciting! And coming from you? Definitely something to look forward to! Can't wait for the next installment :)

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Date: 2011-03-11 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natsukashi-yume.livejournal.com
I've been a skulking fangirl of your stories for so long (though I don't think I've ever commented.. terrible of me). I am SO excited for this... really, we get 54 chapters of this!?! The AU set-up is so thoroughly done that I was wondering at first if it was the real Kamenashi just a few years down the line. Then the line about canceling on Tatsuya was so subtle, the reality of it didn't sink in.. but when he shudders thinking about his wife packing his overnight bag.. that's when I felt the foreshadowing kick in. I really liked how we get to know this Kamenashi through how he reacts to people... who he decides is worth protecting and who he thinks is annoying. I can't wait to see this unfold!

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Date: 2011-03-11 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brindhakrishnan.livejournal.com
This is really interesting! Its usually Jin who tends to "buy" or "use" Kame but its the other way round here! Can't wait to read the rest! Thanks for sharing this!!^^

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Date: 2011-03-11 06:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-aenea.livejournal.com
OMG!!!!!
I've been waiting for this so long I almost screamed when I saw it posted.
I'm bracing myself for the angsty ride, which isn't usually my thing at ALL, but if you write it girls, I'll read it *creepy fan here 8D

I have a THING for kame/kimura, so, even hinted at, it made my day!

I'll wait patiently for the next chapter!!!

Luv ya girls!!

54 Chapters?

Date: 2011-03-11 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ashi-ga-demasu.livejournal.com
When I read the title and it says "1/54", I thought the fraction was part of the title. Then I read the notes and realized you weren't kidding. I mean, really? 54 Chapters?

I'm a big fan of your author notes (as much as your actual work) so I usually comment right after the notes. Anyway. Whatever. I haven't read. "Let me read this shit already!" God, you're funny.

Re: 54 Chapters?

Date: 2011-03-11 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ashi-ga-demasu.livejournal.com
Intriguing first chapter. Kame's character is interesting. I foresee much angst and I'm gonna brace myself for it.

Much admiration for the dedication. Kudos. And I thank you in advance for what I expect is gonna be quite a ride.

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Date: 2011-03-11 11:43 am (UTC)
pithetaphish: (joyful joyful)
From: [personal profile] pithetaphish
Innnnnnnnnnteresting... this year shall be quite the epic journey I think ^_~

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Date: 2011-03-11 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tinna116.livejournal.com
seems really interesting .. very much ^^

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Date: 2011-03-11 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] matchynishi.livejournal.com
LKAJSFDLKSJD THAT WAS JUST INITIAL REACTION

but i think my second, third and fourth reactions were also indistinguishable from my first reaction, precisely because i kind of know what's coming-ish alksdjflkjvlksadjflksdjfalkjlakj *____*

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Date: 2011-03-12 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rmatsom.livejournal.com
LOve it so much...

Another epic fic...

cant wait for next updates...

First akame's encountering...must be really interesting!!!

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Date: 2011-03-12 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dazehyde.livejournal.com
Whoaaaa... this fic is so interesting dear~ ♥
I wonder what will happen to them since Kazu is a married man~ XD
Can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope it'll be soon~ *get smack*

Thanx for writing and sharing dear~ ♥
Both of you are AMAZING! ^______^

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Date: 2011-03-13 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akamedakenae.livejournal.com
love it cant wait for more

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Date: 2011-03-27 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnemonic-psych.livejournal.com
I AM EXTREMELY BELATEDLY HERE WITH A PROPER COMMENT but I am here none the less. Better late than never right XD??

Okay so, thoughts:

At first I was like omg are we diving straight into action, what it going on, did I miss something until you guys brought up the fact that they're shooting, to which I have to say: NICELY DONE. sldkfjs that was a very well executed move, I know I'm not making any sense, but bear with me as it's reaching 3am so my brain is not at it's best XD. Secondly I lovelovelove that Kame is an actor *___*. reminds me of that transcript with the origins of whorefic bc of Fitz's Soft Skin Boys also having Kame as the actor, being a pretty woman au after all. ACTOR!KAME FTW! Though I am more than a little annoyed with his colleagues -.- their existence keeps hassling him. I mean Kame's a nice guy about it but DDDDD: people need to stop bugging him and Toyoda should stop being such a brat. just saying :| #harsh #protective.

Okay and, y'know, me having my weird tendencies, I could gloss over Kame's mention of Tatsuya. However, with Jin...

But he can't think of anybody who's seemed unhappy with him since the incident with Nakamaru.

lksjd;f;s;dfk Nakamaru what. I think I had like a horrified squawk of painful laughter. I mean. It's Maru T__T ♥.

And I really liked the way that the Johnny's environment was described, more like dropping hints and setting out pieces to put together than a block of detail. Really created the right atmosphere imo :o. And uh...I know this is a dumb question to be asking but...is Yuuya like...Tego o_o. Am holding out on the fact that there are younger Yuuya's in the company...ksdjhf seeing Jin being nice and kinda older brotherly to Tego kills me bc of the whole usero rumour. Still, I like the way Jin is showing him the ropes, he's such a sweetheart T_T. I wonder if we'll get to know stuff about what Tego's...street life past was like exactly, given his convo with Jin o_o...

Oh and I have only one word for Junno: awesome. :B

Kame's fake apartment makes me a little sad, that after a long day, that's what he has to go home to :(. but then:

Ootomo seems pleased and directs him to a few profile pages, all good-looking men, vaguely familiar from his nights at the club, all—

Kame stops.

"The fourth one," he says, "he's…"


I was like SKSD::KF:SDLS:LDFK:LK. KAME STOPS. THE FOURTH ONE. my mind was totally screaming Jin, bc obvs, but still, it's such a perfect moment, Kame's reaction *_______*

Also, KAMENASHI IS SOMETIMES KIMURA's. I just. Somehow that is really fitting. I MEAN I'M NOT SHIPPING THEM OR ANYTHING O_O just that ksdjfhds kimura is like the Kimutaku, and Kame only has the best (clearly). AND NOW KAME IS........HAVING........JIN :DDDD...for lack of a better word skdjfh XD. Also eeee, Kokame friendship, I see it :D. And again, more hints about the kind of establishment Johnny's is and Jin's relative position, and you guys, I really love your style of writing T______T

AND NOW I'M GOING TO ABRUPTLY STOP JUST LIKE YOU BOTH DID except I'm not leaving you hanging like you left me. hanging. off a cliffhanger. :|||| /never letting this go

p.s. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥!!!!!

p.p.s. sorry about the um, absurd length >>......I'm just longwinded....T_T

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Date: 2011-03-28 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnemonic-psych.livejournal.com
are you suuuuure. i mean. you both churned out hundreds of thousands of words; i wouldn't want to make you have to deal with responding to long comments too :B :B :B

the lack of kamedrama irl hurts my soul :(. Tego's talents...I can really only just think of his crossdresssing tendencies rn XD

WHAT POOR TOYODA. i mean it's her own fault for being so blargh rly :| #doesnotforgiveeasily

EVILLLLLL. Thinking of Maru's uncomfortable moments in CTKT when the ladies were getting close to him ksjhfskdjfshdf HIS LIFE IS SO HARD XDDD

if monibrows were as powerful as kamebrows, jin and kame would be ~exclusive~. alas....T_T....... :P

SDLKFJSDS I ACTUALLY FACEPALMED AT THAT LAST SENTENCE. AND I WEAR GLASSES. :|||....XDDD