The Same Deep Water As You (03/54)

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

The Same Deep Water As You (03/54)
by solo____ & jo_lasalle
Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya / Akanishi Jin
Rating: Explicit
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Alternate Universe fiction. None of this is true.
Warnings: If there are any warnings for this story, you will find them here.
Summary: Kame's got his reasons for seeing prostitutes. Jin's got his reasons for being one. Life is pretty screwed up.
Notes: Story notes, acknowledgements and frantically reiterated disclaimers are here.

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If Tatsuya and Kimura-senpai put up with Kamenashi's creepy shit uncomplainingly, they're sure earning every yen of their twenty per cent luxury premium.

Comments

[akamaru07.livejournal.com]

"Yes, an appointment would be good. I wonder if Jin might be free Monday night."

KSJFALSKJDKFLKSD. I knew it. Can't wait for next week xD
Thank you! *hands you cookies*

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

*Cookies eagerly devoured.* We are veritable cookie monsters. :-)

Thank you for commenting!

[tinna116.livejournal.com]

hi, .. I`m so curious about Kame`s reasons .. why he acts like he acts .. hehe does it make a sense? .. I so enjoy this story!
thanks for sharing^^

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Thank you, this is a cool comment. We're glad you find Kame intriguing. :-) We do hope he won't just remain puzzling...

[candle-lies.livejournal.com]

Hi! Just wanna say that I'm really liking this story so far and looking forward to the next updates! :)

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Thank you for telling us! It's much appreciated. We hope you'll continue to have fun! :-)

[dungbrains.livejournal.com]

This is so frustrating. Because it's so good. I love this AU. And their personalities. Because somehow, Kame's perfectionism IRL and Jin's needs would totally explain why Kame is so kinky and Jin an escort. I love realism.
But waiting every week is killiiiiiing me. It's so good.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

We are, um, sorry for your waiting pain. Don't let it kill you, or you won't know how it ends!!! :-)

Yes, Kame likes things to be organised and under control. Glad you see where we're coming from with regard to canon!

Psst, forgive us our curiosity... may we ask how you see Jin's needs? We're curious about just which aspect you are considering. :-)

Thanks so much for the feedback! And, um, hang in there? ;-)

[natsukashi-yume.livejournal.com]

So glad to see another chapter of this up! Even though Kame might have been within his rights, I'm sensing that this is somewhat more about power and control than about sex for him. Tatsuya is easy but Jin could be a conquest. Poor little wild-haired Jin won't know what hit him. It was lovably frustrating how you teased us with why Jin might have found being tied up so disturbing and then pulled back. It's also funny how though the premise of the story is about prostitution, so much of it is regimented, controlled and by the book (how Kame thinks there's probably a policy for everything). It somehow makes it seem sad instead of passionate, which at this point must be precisely what you're aiming for. And when "Don't Forget" flashes on Kame's phone... I really pitied him then.

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Kame has a hard life. No, wait... :-)

You're right, Jin's a very different matter from Tatsuya, for lots of reasons - some to do with Kame, some to do with Jin. Poor Kame, all he wanted was some nice buttsecks... and now there's this! :-)

It's a very nice point you made about the regulation of the club; for the escorts it's better, safer, but it seems pretty bureaucratic, doesn't it? On the other hand, most escorts are probably not in it for the passion anyway, and it also helps the clients, who don't have to worry about being outed. A very respectable whorehouse. ;-)

We love hearing your thoughts about what's going on. Thank you for this beautiful comment!

[silverrain184.livejournal.com]

omg OMG TROUBLE AHEAD!

I was already curious when Jin got 'off the hook' quite easily.
You're so evil ;P

I actually didn't quite expect Kame to feel like this only towards Jin (so in need of control), I thought it would be a usual tick.
Makes it a nice and even more interesting twist and I'm eager to find out what's behind all this!

Btw, I really like how you describe the shooting atmosphere and everything around it^^

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Evil... we sometimes feel quite evil. And a bit guilty. And then we rub our hands again in glee. So, definitely evil. :-)

Yeah, you picked up on some stuff WRT Kame... he doesn't quite get it himself, really. Hopefully things will become a little clearer in the near future!

Thank you for your compliment on the filming! We do hope that is interesting too, even if it doesn't have anything directly to do with Akame, so this pleased us a lot!

[lady-aenea.livejournal.com]

Maybe you should know that I bought a new cell phone so i could read this every thursday at my new job (that has restrited internet access)... @_@ An maybe you should know that I still thin it's DANM worth it (though when I SCREAMED when Kame requested Jin again, loked on the bathroom it might have been a little weird... perhaps).

I'm soooo loving this!!!! *_*
I love Kame all "square" and contained *_*

Luv ya girls!!! Thanks!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Oooh, we are proud of ourselves now. Or should we apologize? Sorry about the added expense. ;-) Is it a nice phone?

Also we are now picturing screams emanating from a bathroom stall. Whoops. (Though some might find this only appropriate with whorefic...)

We're really happy you're loving it, and your description of Kame made us bounce a little. Thank you for this.

[mnemonic-psych.livejournal.com]

maybe i will one day get used to the cruel way you end these chapters


that day is not in the foreseeable future :|

LSKDJFSLDFKJSDFS I WANT THEM TO MEET AGAIN GDI T_________________T

[jo-lasalle.livejournal.com]

But it's all your fault, Moni. Kame's not going to get laid before we get Moni comments, we did the contingency rewriting just yesterday.

[cnidaria-jin.livejournal.com]

Getting in love with this fic.
Once per week is a pain but i'll keep myself waiting ^^

and can't wait to see they meet again ♥

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Thank you for getting hooked. :-) We hope you'll enjoy next week too, and that it's worth the wait!

[diisa-pinky.livejournal.com]

omg!! can't wait for the next Monday!! XDDD
surely there'll be an interesting scenes~

thanks for updating ^^

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

We definitely hope next week will be interesting. *eg* Thank you for the feedback, we hope you'll continue to have fun!

[are-in.livejournal.com]

thanks fro the update~

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Thank you for commenting!

[becquinho.livejournal.com]

You two are being delightful if a bit trying teases here ^_~ ♥ *applauds*

hrrmm very intrigued by the way this is developing *g* especially their dynamic and respective issues!

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

We... try. (Junno medal) :p

Hey, you're an Akame fan. Haven't you learned patience and a frugal appreciation of small things? *g*

Thank you for commenting!

[nightinbird.livejournal.com]

With every chapter, I get happier that there's so much of this! :D

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Hee. That makes us feel so much better about our word count. *g* Thanks for sticking around!

[angedecristal.livejournal.com]

LOL at a frustrated & evil Kazuya!;)BUT!OMGooooD!Overload sexiness!
Hummm!
Seriously,however they're so different in every way,it's impressive how much they reveal each others issues & vulnerabilities!
Wow!It almost seems like they were bound to meet!And how strange when reunited they look like a fucking molotov cocktail!
I really wonder what this "relationship" will develop into?
Sthg softer i hope.As for the moment it may be painful & miserable to watch,but it's also so intense & hot!So beautifully written!
Love ur realistic style,every words choosen right...but strangely poetic at the same time.
As much as i want a "sex scene",it would be really interesting to see a childlike Jin explaining to a determinate Kazuya why he isn't keen on doing bondage.Wanna know his secrets!!!
THANKS so MUCH for sharing! :)

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Poor Kame. Frustration is no fun. ;-)

We're really happy that you are finding the way they highlight each other's issues convincing. And hey, it's Akame, of course it was FATE that they should meet. Right? :D

Well, we have another 380k words or so to let the relationship develop, so you can bet it's going to change a bit. (Eventually. *eg*)

Thank you for telling us you find it hot despite the angst, and for saying such kind things about our style. We're pretty obsessed with 'getting the words right' so it's great to hear that it works for you.

[brindhakrishnan.livejournal.com]

I am very surprised that Kame has forgiven and has requested for Jin..wasn't expecting it at all...
How would Jin react to that...I wonder!
Thanks for sharing this and as we move along the chapters the story gets more and more interesting...

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

'Forgiven' might not quite be the word, but Kame's definitely up for giving this a second try. *g*

Thank you for the feedback, we hope it'll continue to get more interesting. :-)

[sakurascorpion.livejournal.com]

Wow this story is good! I would love to read more. Please keep updating. Thanks for posting it! :)

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Thank you for commenting. You bet we're going to keep updating, now that it's finally done! :-)

[ununoriginal.livejournal.com]

love the detail u put into building this world! kame & jin's motivations in this story really intrigue me - i'm very much looking forward to the next chapter :)

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

We're glad you like the detail - we both got quite obsessive about hashing it all out. :-) Thank you for commenting.

[watashinoanata.livejournal.com]

a tied up Jin is always a good image ^^
looking for the next chapter

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Kame totally agrees with you! :-) Hope you like what's coming.

[carboncastel.livejournal.com]

This is really intriguing! A very interesting premise. I have theories about the characters but I'll keep them to myself for now (in case I'm wrong lol). I'll be waiting eagerly for the next updates. :D

Also, if you don't mind me asking, I wonder if there's going to be more mention of Nakamaru? His short cameo in the fic was just precious! Haha. I'd like to read more about him in the fic coz I'm biased like that. xD

[haikuesque.livejournal.com]

Aw, but we're interested in your theories. :-) Not that we'd tell you if you're right or wrong, because we don't want to give everything away right at the start. So we guess we can't complain if you want to keep them to yourself. *g*

Nakamaru... well, he's a client at the club, so he'll be there on occasion, yes. We can't honestly say that he's a key player and gets a lot of plot, just so you're not disappointed, but there will be more appearances on the scale of this one, we'd say.