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The Same Deep Water As You
by [livejournal.com profile] solo____ & [livejournal.com profile] jo_lasalle
Pairing: Kamenashi Kazuya / Akanishi Jin
Rating: Explicit
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Alternate Universe fiction. None of this is true.
Warnings: If there are any warnings for this story, you will find them here.
Summary: Kame's got his reasons for seeing prostitutes. Jin's got his reasons for being one. Life is pretty screwed up.
Notes: Story notes, acknowledgements and frantically reiterated disclaimers are here.

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Kame's never gotten over the instant jolt of diffidence when Takuya rests his eyes on him and smiles and turns Kame into an awkward schoolboy going on his first date.

 

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Date: 2011-06-02 09:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shirayuki1582.livejournal.com
Spot! :D *goes reading*

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Date: 2011-06-02 11:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shirayuki1582.livejournal.com
Okok... I admit that I've been lurking behind the corner until you put up the update today xD And wow I'm the first one commenting :D

Anyways, loved this chapter *__________* I'm glad that Kame decided to tag along with Tanaka and go to the club anyway because it was obvious that he was finally having some fun and felt relaxed among the others. I think in this chapter it's probably the first time we get to like Kame's character and understand him a little bit better. It's nice to see his "bright" side a bit more. It's cute how he's all nervous about his crush on Takuya but I also liked how he admitted that he'd rather play a different kind of character in the movies for once because in another situation he'd never admit it. Feel a bit sorry for him for that, because he doesn't seem to be too happy or satisfied with what he does...
And then Jin arrives...
The part of "Jin smiles, like he means it" caught my attention. I love it so much when Jin smiles like that ♥♥♥
It's kind of amusing how Kame really can't help it. Like they both "hate" each other somehow and still... he sees Jin and feel extremely drawn to him and that confuses him a lot. xD Like, for a moment it seemed like he starts panicking but then magically gets up and approaches Jin and Yuuya and things... just happen. It's like he's driven by an invisible force. :)
Of course there's his paranoia kicking in when he sees Jin talk to Yuuya and immediately assumes that they talk about him -_____-'.
And honestly that conversation at the counter is the hottest thing ever. There's so much (unresolved) sexual tension going on. It's like you could light up a match with simple air in that moment. very powerful. loved it <3 Yuuya is super cute during the conversation and then there's of course Kame's obsession with Jin's lips and Jin... omg Jin surprised me! He had more than one opportunity to walk away from the two. He could have lied and said that he's picked for the night already or that he's busy elsewhere or whatever. He didn't. He was just fine with it....? o.O Wow. What happened to you Jin all of a sudden. Maybe he can't help it either? ;)

The whole Yuuya/Kame/Jin interaction was definitively something I wouldn't have expected. Kame is creative... xD But maybe it's just what they need. Yuuya seems to balance out their insanity (at least a bit). I already can't wait for next Thursday because I'm so curious about how this will turn out! And I'm looking forward to Kame's date with Tatsuya too!! :)

p.s. I had to delete this comment twice because I made so many typos -_____-'

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Date: 2011-06-03 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shirayuki1582.livejournal.com
Well.... I started writing the comment on my phone which is a very difficult task because phones love typos and then it kept posting my comment in the middle, all unfinished and yeah... in the end I decided to finish the comment online on my comp :)
I hope we'll get to see more of cute and dorky Kame...? Someday....? :)

And then blame Jin!
haha. well.... of course xDDD It's aaaall Jin's fault that Kame's so confused. Jin with his gorgeous eyes and lips and hair and......! ;)

I'm even more curious now then, how this will go on!
And don't be nervous. :) I'm really hard to please (with fanfics) so the fact that I'm still here at chapter 13 has to mean something right? :) Just don't go kill akame or something like that please. And I'm very honest and straightforward so I'd let you know if something would bug me too much :) I like how you put so much thought into this and how you make it seem plausible and I never know what will happen next.

sorry for spamming you inbox .______. I should be studying but akame is so much more interesting...........

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Date: 2011-06-02 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silverrain184.livejournal.com
uuuuh, you can't just stop there?!! argh!

That's a nice chance I think...maybe in company of Yuuya, Jin doesn't have to fear Kame's behavior and Kame can see more of Jin in another perspective...

...or Yuuya sees Kame's behavior, too and Jin doesn't have to suffer alone anymore/has at least someone to share his trouble with.

Damn, I'm so curious how this will turn out!

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Date: 2011-06-02 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silverrain184.livejournal.com
lol and Kame and his crush on Takuya.
That's so fitting imo^^

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Date: 2011-06-02 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silverrain184.livejournal.com
oh and I'm really curious what happened to Jin's "I can just refuse him"...

...he didn't even seem to give it as much as a try^^

I hope that was my last addition *haha*

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Date: 2011-06-02 11:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agustin1982.livejournal.com
Yayyyyyyyy new updayeeeee^^

Make me wonder wonder what happen the next~~~~~~~~~~~~

Love this chapter^^

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Date: 2011-06-02 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nitzi.livejournal.com
No!! You cannot stop here, you just can't! ;_; this is just cruel!!
I gave up hope when Jin and Yuuya talked about kink and Jin flat-out refused, and now this *_*

but why on earth is Jin so compliant all of a sudden? I kind of expected him to walk away from Kame and Yuuya, especially when Kame proposed the threesome. Is he so desperate because he lost a regular client in the last chapter? Can't figure out what he is thinking...

Anyway, I love this story :D thank you so much for having written it!

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Date: 2011-06-03 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nitzi.livejournal.com
hah - I don't believe it :) Maybe Maeda's spaghetti made Jin's brain blurred... being so available to Kame all of a sudden...

I'm really interested how Kame expects Yuuya to help him handle Jin. Or if he allows Yuuya to f*** him. Next chapter will be from Jin's POV, right?

And - I wish there were more innocent creatures such as you around here ;P

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Date: 2011-06-02 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tinna116.livejournal.com
soo .. this is going to be really interesting !!!

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Date: 2011-06-03 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-aenea.livejournal.com
No amount of words in the WORLD could convey what I felt with this chapter.

I just can't say it.

I was reading at my desk, in the office and I almost screamed with all the encounter between Kameand Kimura... then I had to stop for a while cause I was blushing madly (and I've been sick a lot lately -that's why I hadn't commented on the two previous chapters... sorry T_T-, so my coworkers were begginning to think I had a fever).

And then I read all the Yuuya part.... and now I love Tego. And YOU left me hanging at THAT point!!!!!! adsssdadsaddsadsdsa

I need it to be next thursday right now!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!
Thanks!!!!

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Date: 2011-06-03 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natsukashi-yume.livejournal.com
Oh god, oh god, oh god... I'm literally fanning myself as I finish this chapter. the image makes Kame swallow hard so he doesn't embarrass himself with a sound. I think I let out a squeak there... failed to swallow it. I CAN SEE WHERE THIS IS GOING AND ALKSDJALKDJALKJAKSA:LA:SFJLH

*phew* I think I got it out of my system...

Let's see... I love Tegoshi! He's got that familiar precocious, bratty vibe, but he's also seen things and done things that make me feel sorry for him. If I'm reading this right Jin kind of threw himself into the ring to protect Tegoshi from Kame, not because he was in any way eager to hit that. *snorts* Oh Jin.. you giant... panda. >.>

Tanaka was awesome and I'm really happy that Kame has at least one friend who isn't a paid escort of some kind. Their dynamic is interesting, but not as relaxed as I would imagine, but that's probably down to Kame's shielding with everyone. And Kimura!!! OMG, *of course* he does this as a side thing next to a truly exclusive hobby and flusters everyone when he comes around. And Kame's crush on him is just too cute for words.

The beginning of the chapter transmits exactly the vibe you were going for.. so easy, relaxed, familiar even though we have no idea what the usual is for Kame. It became apparent why he considers this a safe haven where other places he limits himself to two drinks in case his tongue gets loose.

I still can't figure out who Danny is... is he a Johnny in the real world? And I see what you did there.. with Nakamaru and Taguchi.. but then I guess Maru couldn't close the deal. And when this group starts feeling up Kame... *dies*

I like this promise of Ueda and Kame in the future, but I like the promise of the ending here even more. Oh god, brain explode. can't brain.

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Date: 2011-06-03 02:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natsukashi-yume.livejournal.com
I'm barely more coherent now... but seriously thank you for the break.

I'm glad my rambling lets you know you're transmitting the right nuances.. ;)

I'm feeling an urge to call him Panda-san from now on.

Sure Kame.. you don't have a crush. *eye roll*

You know, I can't think of any tall, white blondes fitting for the role either (except maybe Orlando in his Legolas get up and oh god that just made me crack up. And yes, there have been two LOTR references in my replies today... what is wrong with me?)

I'm not sure if I ever mentioned in my own journal.. you can call me Pri. I'm just weird about making it public. :)

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Date: 2011-06-03 06:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] souleater-angel.livejournal.com
This was a good chapter, filled with many interesting interactions.
This chapter must have occurred sometime after the last chapter then... yet Jin doesn't seem to try to refuse Kame at all like what he planned to do. Is he really that desperate for clients?

Kame WANTS Jin. He really likes Tatsuya, really likes Takuya, but he REALLY LIKES Jin, whether he admits it or not. When Takuya was around his thoughts weren't gushing with hopeless and nearly uncontained implications of arousal, and with Tatsuya he had a few pleasant memories and images in his head but there was no NEED in it, the way that happens when Jin is just there. He has some sort of compulsion with Jin, like he simply cannot stay away from him.

And he definitely intended to stay away from Jin; didn't even want to see him or have anything to do with him and now he's going off with him AGAIN. Yuuya too, didn't expect that. THAT will be interesting I must say.

You stopped at such a, what's the word, formidable place. There are so many possibilities of what will soon happen.. :]

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Date: 2011-06-03 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brindhakrishnan.livejournal.com
I needed an entire minute of OMG-what-just-happened-break before typing my comment. That was just how much this chapter has affected me and my brains.

Initially as I was reading, I thought this chapter was similar to before in that previously Jin kept staring at the door waiting for Kame and in this Kame kept thinking of not meeting Jin while sitting on a couch. And I was thinking Oh well what two peas in a pod we have. Both blatantly trying to deny their attraction to the other. Both not wanting to meet the other?, that was just insane.

That was until that scene where Jin and Kame made eye contact. OMG! It was just so nerve wrecking. I am just so amazed by how you wrote that out!!!! ARGH...I was truly sitting at the edge of my sit by then waiting for what is going to happen. And I am so glad you didn't give us a cliffhanger there, well not that it was better as it is now. But if you did it back there, I would so have gone mad a whole week to find out what AKAME did to each other when their eyes met. *phew*

And before they did, Kame trying to suppress his thoughts and trying to not make a deal when he clearly was affected by Jin's presence. See I really love Kame. He was reacting so well with Tanaka, Danny, Takahisa and Yuuya. But the moment he meets Jin, its hysterical Kame. Why would he even think Jin was talking about him to Yuuya?? lol... Kame kame kame!! *shakes head* I would think Jin would have frozen by the mere mention of Kame by Yuya.

And the biggest shocker was Jin reciprocating Kame. Initially I missed Kame in the previous chapter I was hoping to read more about him here BUT ("Jin opens his mouth, closes it. Opens it. "I'm… not busy.") --->I so would have wanted to know what Jin was thinking then. Kame accepts??? What happened to his whole plan of avoiding Jin and waiting till his sunday date with Tatsuya???? Are we going to get some jealousy issues next chapter?? I wonder....

Oh and I totally love the Kimukame interaction!! Kame so does have a crush on Kimutaku!! lol. I have been a fan of both since 2008 so I got really excited when reading that! lol xD

Thanks for sharing this!!! Woah, I think the two can keep denying their attraction forever and I won't believe it! ♥

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Date: 2011-06-04 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miyau-chan.livejournal.com
Yeeeaaah so I finally managed to catch up with all the chapters I missed .... ._.'

I hope you don't get angry when I say this fic really frustrates me ._.
Argh those guys... XD Why are they so hateful against each other, really XD
Jin's so lame not only with Kame but especially with Kame! XD I mean it's understandable and stuff but it's like a tiger who lost it's teeth TT___TT (Though he was so cute with Yuuya in this chap! It was like my heart bloomed! ♥) Maybe Kame feels same as me, because I want to kick his ass everytime he's such a slow-poke but at the same time I want to kick Kame in the guts because he's such an asshole! He's so mean and false and argh >.<
But it's so funny how they both can't stop thinking about each other. Not really in a good way though, it feels more like they're obsessed with each other. Can't wait for for thouse feelings to develop to love v.v

Kame seems the typical guy who smiles at you but slashs your guts open in his fantasies. That's creepy really XD
Kame's so nice when with Kimutaku (lol the fanboycrush lol) or Yuuya. Regarding the last one I wonderd since his first appearance which Yuuya it is! His flamboyant gay attitude reminds me of Tegoshi but then there are a lot of others like Takaki and just to give this little flirt a face, I wanted to make sure!

I'm in an inner conflict about those long chapters about their everyday live, really. Normally I read Multichaps then when it's finished or promises to finish soon. Then I really appreciate if there are some insights in normal live/past/whatever as well, not only loveydovey and fucking. Your fic would be great regarding this point, but now when I only get to read so little every week it's so unsatisfying if there's up to zero development in Akames relationship! It leaves me craving and on the edge XD
I'm someone who reads a fic with (estimated XD) ~600 word pages in 1 1/2 day if it's good because I'm so engrossed and just can't wait so you girls really give me a hard time here XD
But I try to cope with it! y.y

Like ever I'm so unsatisfied I'm gnashing me teeth here, but well you could take that as some kind of praise XD
I really think this fic has high potential and I wish I would have waited with beginning to read it until you've finished. But now I already started and I can only control myself and wait for chapis to pile up for so long XD

I expect one hell of a sexy sex in the next chapter, just so you know! :D You guys wrote one of my most loved sexscene (which I still haven't commented yet because I'm such a forgetfull lazyass) so I'm really curious of what you'll make out of this yummy threesome :)

Did I forget sth I wanted to say? x__X I lost track... I'm not good with commenting. To messy as you can see XD
Well... if I did I hope I remember to squeeze it into my next comment x__X

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Date: 2011-06-06 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miyau-chan.livejournal.com
No I'm not D: If there weren't any spaces, there'd no need to take breaks and catch up XD

Hah! I so knew it's Tegoshi!
Funny thing my friend and I started to have this Akametegopi foursome/... quadrangle(?) thing, so you've 3/4 now XD
But I won't be unhappy if there won't be any lol. I just want Akame! So get a grip, Kame -.-

Hm, so it would frustrate you not to know, ne? I kinda like the thought of getting my revenge. No really, I could get off to it.
Bittersweet Justice... Sounds like a fic-title

But yeah reminds me, that I wanted to leave a comment there XD I bet as soon as I posted this commend I will have forgotten about it again...

Normally I really appreciate everyday life chapters! In my opinion the depth of the story lies in developing specific characteristical traits for the charas as well as the surroundings (incl. side-charas). I know it's not easy to create a new world especially for the fic (but I love to do it lol) so I have to pay you my respect
But gaaaaaaaaaaah!!! The non-interaction gap preys on my mind >.<
Is there a way to corrupt you girls into sending me the whole fic now? :x We could say I'm like the fifth beta reader or sth as an excuse :D
(Okay just kidding - not)

Oh, I'll definitely enjoy the s...tuff to come.


Btw, I noticed that my keyboard doesn't function as well anymore, so I'm very sorry for missing letters in addition to my bad grammar and... everything XD But as long as I can get my point across, ne? :P


Countdown: 3 days left....

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Date: 2011-06-05 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baybeshyne.livejournal.com
the lil scene between takuya and kame was so nice =)
OMG...jin kame and tego?! i cant even begin to explain how much im looking forward to that!
jin and kame...their interaction is just so...the way kame is so drawn to jin...while jin seems to be practically scared shitless everytime he encounters him.
when will they ever have a comfortable time together...i wonder?!
thanks for the update...cant wait til next week for sure!

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Date: 2011-06-10 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keeaneegan.livejournal.com
i missed the whole chapters..
i need few days to read because i'm a slow and old reader , so please give me that few days then i'll comeback to comment ^_^